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Bewilder was my middle name as I felt lost and torn
experiencing fallacious feelings before the hike that nothing would go wrong
going on the Appalachian Trail had always been my goal
but unrealistically couldn't eviscerate the rough terrains soil

I had hiked off the beaten path to obtain some privacy
curious I looked around for a thick bush or a hidden tree
finally crouching down I let all my inhibitions go
as I watched the steady stream of pent up urine flow

Disoriented I looked to my right and my left
as the scarlet ball in the sky was about to set
my mind became a vortex of worried thoughts
wondering what had happened to the compass I had bought

On a whim and a prayer I tried to call home
but being in the deep woods there was no signal for cell phones
with dusk enveloping my environment I took out my trusty flashlight
wondering if I should venture further left or to the right

As I walked I heard in the distance a coyote let out a wild cry
as I thanked God for the flashlight and the full moon in the sky
thick branches of pine trees molested my passing form
as I found a clearing and set up camp while waiting for dawn

I tossed and turned nervously and let out many sighs
and heard eerie noises while sleep did tantalize
finally nodding off from exhaustion I woke up to sunrise
packing up my gear to go on my back for another ride

Hiking for what seemed like miles I heard a blessed noise
and going in that direction I spied two teenage boys
who helped me get back to the AT which I thought would be so much fun
and while driving back to civilization still proud I had taken the plunge.



6-19-18

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Date: 6/30/2018 9:12:00 AM
Wow! I think this is a very creative story brilliantly and humorously using the 8 words. A fave for me! I thoroughly enjoyed it. :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/30/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind flattering comment and visit Susan; I really appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 6/29/2018 7:03:00 PM
Nice story Cheryl, congrats on a fine placement!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/29/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind congrats and for placing me as one of the fourth place winners John; I really appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 6/20/2018 1:07:00 AM
Wow would love to do that, have you really done it ? Tom.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/20/2018 7:31:00 AM
No, just in my mind lol! Maybe one day when I finally retire...just hope will have the stamina as I'm no spring chicken anymore! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom!~Che :)

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