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Loss

Melancholy Nostalgia A homage to the past That encompasses bored Sunday's We spent together Looking out the bay windows In inclement weather Beside a log fire After lunch Every bit the family squabbling My Dad would say Familiarity breads contempt How right he was How we fought and never thought Of what he was speaking of When the fog finally cleared And reality settled The **** had truly hit the fan And all that was left Was everybody looking back Melancholic nostalgically Fractured protracted Reminiscent of missing We pay the cost of loss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/21/2017 9:02:00 AM
A monkey puzzle of nostalgia and pain for times that are perhaps remembered on the softer side. The log fire etc giving a hint of hominess and positivity while the closeness made for a sense of crowding and frustration. Well done.
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