Loss- By Poet Destroyer and Lee Ramage

LOSS by~ LEE RAMAGE Just as poems paint a picture And songs take you on a journey How do I keep you with me Now that you’re no longer here I am pink clay and you are blue Mold and mix us together Separation is near impossible An image drawn in my mind by~ Poet Destroyer The image you draw in my mind Are enjoying the pink and blue flush clouds Clever as one on a calm night Loss is never forever, Mold me and hold me You will see the journey will paint a picture near the sea Twist me in to a midnight nursery rhyme Mix us into the wilderness that will never separate There you will find the perfect clay and create ~ A poem without loss and endless possibilities a collaboration with * Poet Destroyer
Written for "Collaborate with Me" contest Won 3rd Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/21/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Lee. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D.,Lee
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win Lee!!! so happy to see this on the top...always Michael
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "collaborate with me"...CR
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Date: 9/16/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win..I think that I read this one on P.D.'s page..Enjoyed..
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:06:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Lee : )
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/16/2011 5:47:00 PM
Thanks Jack,you were the first to comment on this poem when Linda and I first wrote it. much appreciated, Lee
Date: 9/16/2011 7:58:00 AM
Congrats Lee on a fantastic third place win with this awesome collab with PD.. enjoy luv..for excellent poetry..
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/16/2011 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Linda-Marie, greatly appreciated, Linda is great to work with. Much appreciated. Lee
Date: 9/16/2011 1:33:00 AM
Lee, Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my contest... it was a joy working with you.... thank you,..LINDA
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/16/2011 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I enjoy your style, well done. Thank you it is an honour to place 3rd in your contest and to share it with you. Thank you and congratulations to you also. Love Lee
Date: 9/13/2011 11:46:00 AM
You two write so well together - love it
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/13/2011 10:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Jack, greatly appreciated. Lee
Date: 9/11/2011 1:06:00 AM
hi!!!! oooo! that was quick... i just looked over my poem, and i just added my last line.... Can you please add the line as well. thank you, and this was very fun and different... hope to see you stop by our poem.... take care,..LINDA
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/11/2011 12:08:00 PM
Hi Linda, sorry I am at Toronto film festival so was cleaning things up before I left, I've added the line. I am proficient if nothing else ;) I love the poem, thanks so much. Lee
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