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Losing and Lost

Nobody likes to be on that side to be losing nor even be lost but so many feel that's their case particularly at the time of Jack Frost Devastation comes down so hard with that feeling of lost and losing makes you wonder how it came about just maybe down to the choosing Life is all about right decisions so important to know what it's about be wise, patient, and true this pathway's right without a doubt Beware of falling into a downward cycle for these, it just doesn't seem to stop many have fallen into that awful pit stay strong be sure you're no flop Make your motto a positive one that's about winning and being found show yourself highly approved be placed far above on higher ground

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Date: 12/11/2021 7:59:00 AM
What an inspiration to read. Love your line, "Make your motto a positive one." Yes, stay positive. Have a blessed day.........................
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/11/2021 8:22:00 AM
Thanks Paula, Glad you found this an inspiration and especially my positive motto. Have a great weekend, Gordon
Date: 11/27/2021 1:04:00 AM
Original in thought and presentation. Hope you have kept at least one from slipping too far down. Some memorable lines in this piece. You have made it into a series of drum beats. Well done. Best wishes David in NZ
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/27/2021 7:24:00 AM
Thanks David Glad you enjoyed this one and found it original and hope all is wel! In NZ, it's been 90 mph gales here in Scotland last night but all's safe today. Blessings,Gordon
Date: 11/26/2021 7:04:00 PM
Words of wisdom and encouragement, Blessings ~ Debra
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/27/2021 1:03:00 AM
Thanks again Debra, Glad you liked the encouragement and wisdom that my piece brought. Take care and God bless, Gordon
Date: 11/25/2021 6:32:00 AM
Reading your poem I feel that you should have changed the title to 'Losing, but Never Lost' as the poem breathes out energy and wisdom and creates positive vibes. Stay strong Gordon!
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/25/2021 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Valsa, Thanks for your kind words and interesting suggestions blessings,Gordon
Date: 11/25/2021 5:19:00 AM
Your poem is truly an inspiration to read, Gordon. Words of wisdom resonate in every line. So well communicated.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/25/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, Glad you enjoyed this one and found it truly inspirational. . Have a blessed day, Gordon ??
Date: 11/24/2021 9:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... We praise the Lord for seeking us, now saved and not anymore lost by His love and grace. God bless you.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/25/2021 12:35:00 AM
Thanks Beata, Glad you enjoyed this one and echo your sentiments too. God bless, Gordon
Date: 11/24/2021 4:06:00 PM
I like this one Gordon, it's filled with wisdom. Write on! Bill
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/25/2021 12:34:00 AM
Thanks Bill, Glad you liked this one and found it with wisdom. Have a blessed day, Gordon

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