Rachel Mann Poet Rhyme

Losing

Under Pressure
Under stress.
Lost in thought
Without finesse.

Losing self
Losing mind.
Losing life
Losing time.

Darkness strikes
Upon my fate.
Twisted lies
That I ate.

Evil hatred
That I veil.
Hiding pain
But it fails.

Emtpy, hated;
Hollow heart.
All my life
Falls apart.
  
Crumbles down
In a quake.
Losing sight
Gaining hate.

For who am I
To suffer so.
At this point 
I feel so low.

Bring me up
From this dream.
Haunted nightmare
As it seems.

Break me of 
Hated habit.
Lonely life
That I fathom.

I go on
As I may.
Depression felt
'Til this day...

©2009 ~FR34K0N4L345H33

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 15, 2009 at 9:50 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rachel. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Tim Lundmark October 15, 2009 at 7:36 AM I love ryming poems, they are my favorite, and I love dark stuff, so the combination was great. I have a question was this published I see a copyright. Did you copyright all your work? Was it expensive?