Losers

LOSERS


If there’s something I can’t stand it’s all the losers around  -
And man, there’s a ship-load of ‘em out there, having a ball.
Amazing how the world gets by when so many surround
Us as useless passengers.  Not really pulling their weight at all.

You see them every day, the deadbeats, the nothings,
Playing the empty-headed drifter roles,
Who really should and could get busy doing something  -
If they had more  gumption in their souls.

I dunno,  they just make me feel so mad and kinda uneasy
Because they seem to have no feel for the real nitty-gritty,
Lurching from one smutty  moment to another, maybe more sleazy  -
Like autumn butterflies, but not nearly so pretty.

Need their wings clipped, and a serious job of work to do,
Settle down and straighten their lives out, see?
They make me uncomfortable. . . .  probably. . . maybe it’s true. . . . 
Because they  remind me   -   of me.


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Entered in John Freeman's  Contest  - Give Me Your Best Shot!!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/17/2011 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your fourth place win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Sydney
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Date: 11/14/2011 1:09:00 AM
this loser is a big winner, beck!... gala to seee you a foot away from me ( kidding)... super congrats on your awesome win.. :) huggs!
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Date: 11/13/2011 7:59:00 PM
Oh I'm sure you're nothing like them Sidney. LGreat writing though. congratulations, Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/13/2011 5:59:00 PM
Some great and important points you make in this truth, Sid. We pay taxes so that some can lie around and do nothing. Great job for a worthy win Sid. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/4/2011 7:13:00 AM
Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Sidney. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2011 3:17:00 PM
With words that flow such as this?You could not be a loser...
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