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Lord of the Possible

May my love not fade, despite the passing of day, instead may it grow, like the daffodils of May. Let the trumpets resound, may we praise thee and say, 'Thankyou dear Lord, for you make blue skies out of gray'. 03.04.2023

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Lanier Thomas

Date: 5/11/2024 3:21:00 AM

A lovely poem and it shows a great desire to love the Lord more. "May my love not fade, despite the passing of day" is a great opening line. The passing day seems to me to be the whole time of our lives and advancing age.

Charlotte Watkins
Date: 5/15/2024 2:30:00 PM

Indeed it is. May our love never waiver as times come, life becomes harder, or difficulties arise, faith and love in the Lord shall see us through indefinitely till the trumpet sounds. ~ blessings C

Lanier Thomas

Date: 3/11/2024 1:34:00 AM

A really nice poem. This is Alexandrine? I like the flow and content.

Lanier Thomas
Date: 5/15/2024 8:36:00 PM

It seems the last two lines are Alexandrine. There are six syllables and a pause and six more, per line. Nice.

Charlotte Watkins
Date: 3/11/2024 2:53:00 AM

Possibly not. I tried the closest to the one that isn't there on the choice list. Thanks, I thought the poem followed quite well. All the best, please help correct me if you can find on the list one more accurate. - C