Lord of Beauty

What magic infuses the frangipani 
with a luscious  scent so pure,
or, a twilight with pink pellucid rays ?
The same that makes 
a stone menagerie of fossils,
or ripples a mockingbird’s wing
with faint vermillion fires.

Inherent in us  this memory of natural beauty
handed-down along Ancestral lines
Each thing on earth beholden to the same Creator.

2nd. Place 
For Silent One’s 
10 Word Ten Line Challenge

Menagerie     
Vermilion. 
Infuse. 
Mockingbirds
Twilight 
Frangipani
Lusicious
Pellucid. 
Ancestral
Ripples
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 9:55 PM
Delightful ~
Salehi Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 11:34 AM
A lovely poem....
Delaney Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Thanks Pashang
A   Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Hello Suzanne, I love the nature and natural beauty of creation. I'm glad to see you still have such a way with the way your readers. ALways and forever ~A FAN~
Wigley Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 1:30 AM
Well done, Suzy D, lovely piece! Viv x
Delaney Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Thanks Viv: Lazy Sunday here catching up with groups. SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 12:23 AM
You did a beautiful job on this Suz. Congratulations on your well-deserved second placement! : )
Onclaud Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 10:20 AM
so lyrical it reminds me of nature's birthright...a pleasure to read you again, SuZ... big congrats... huggs
Ashley Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Such a lovely and stirring write Suzanne. Congratulations on your excellent placement with your beautiful poem. ~Susan
S     Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Congratulations Suzanne!!
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Lovely poem, Suzanne. Congrats on your win.
Y. Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Hi Suzanne, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Congrats Suzanne on your wonderful win.
One Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 2:38 PM
A great take on the contest and great use of the ten words Suzanne... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Delaney Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Thanks so much SI.......for the inspiration and for my placement. I appreciate you for kickstarting my muse. SuZ
Callus Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 9:00 AM
You undoubtedly give God's natural creations the merit they rightly deserve, Suzanne! This poem is beautiful, and the given words slide effortlessly into place. ~ Warm regards // paul
Delaney Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Paul: I am thankful the words gave me inspiration And for your wonderful support. Best always, SuZ
Inman Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Very well written Suzanne, wonderful use of the ten words.
Leiser Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 10:55 PM
Beautiful verse, Suzanne! GL in the contest :)
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 12:42 PM
- An excellent poem, SuZ - Best of luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Many Thanks Anne-Lise: I appreciate your visits today. Hugs, SuZ
Michael Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Almost impossible not to write a beautiful poem with the vocabulary given...And so you did...for the Creator is everything beautiful known and unknown... Lovely Suzanne...All blessings to you
Delaney Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Yes words and nature are what inspires me. Thanks for your visit and blessings gor a Happy New Year,
Pandit Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:27 AM
A unique theme--the ten words surely speak to your idea of God's creation..well done Suzanne..best for a win.
Delaney Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Thanks Vijay: Two visits in one day.I feel blessed dear friend. SuZ
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