Loosing All Senses

He can normally smell a rat or two especially as

They rattle their cage when leaving the ship

Tastes defeat when they have won another day

Cuddles their clever escape of untouchable glory


The scent at the food bank tickles his hungry senses

Christmas choirs herald another day on the street

Before he digs in the trash for flavours of injustice

Compressed in a doorway he nudges his squeeze


Poverty exudes a strange fragrance of survival

Soundbites of austerity jingle in a jar bell of loss

He savours a few mouthfuls of leftover curry

Pinches his skin to decide whether he is still alive


His nostrils fill with indelible whiffs of rotten flesh

Voices in his head compete for a walk on part

From the take away menu distastefully priced

Then he doffs his cap and lets go of the rope …



13th December 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/21/2019 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Kai
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Date: 12/21/2019 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations Kai for your honorable mention place in the smell sound taste touch contest. I found your sad portrayal of poverty touching. Thanks for entering.
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Date: 12/13/2019 12:35:00 PM
A painful look at life in metaphoric excellency Kai! This time of year brings as much sorrow to some as it does joy to others. Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/14/2019 4:47:00 AM
Thank you for that. Do you live in Hawaii? I visited once as a boy and remember the surf at Waimea Bay. There must be a poem waiting to be written. Happy Season's Greetings to you as well, Kai
Date: 12/13/2019 11:33:00 AM
So well done, reminds me of children who cut to make sure they can still feel.
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