Deb Wilson Poet Limerick

Loose Louise

There was a young man in a pickle
His girlfriend Louise was quite fickle
When the test came out blue
She told him it's not you
With others I played slap and tickle





* for Deborah Guzzi's  Limerick contest

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Debbie Guzzi January 19, 2011 at 4:01 PM One of my favorite games "slap & tickle!" congrad's on your win! now return to your childhood and write one for the kiddies about an animal! Start da DUM da, da DUM da, da DUM da...this time! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2011 at 11:55 AM Very funny, Deb! Congratulations on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown January 19, 2011 at 6:02 AM Congratulations Deb, on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2011 at 8:13 PM hahaha. This one is GREAT!! congratulations

James Fraser January 18, 2011 at 3:31 PM Love it Deb. Oh my! this must have happened quite a few times in history. Many congrats on your win in Deborah's contest....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 18, 2011 at 12:13 PM Congrats Deb on your big win in the Limerick contest by Debbie... a great one my friend and a chart topper too.. enjoy with luv..

Sara Kendrick January 18, 2011 at 9:22 AM Congratulations..Sara

Kory Calhoun January 18, 2011 at 8:10 AM Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kory Calhoun January 17, 2011 at 9:40 AM This is very funny. Good luck in the contest. KC

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 17, 2011 at 7:55 AM Another awesome entry Deb and such a fun read as well ..good luck my friend in the contest ... Deb will just luv... and I am still smiling too...

Nette Onclaud January 16, 2011 at 5:02 PM what a punchline of an ending, deb... laughing alone here; amazing! best of winning luck in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta January 16, 2011 at 3:26 PM yes, thanks for the comments. I have made it to one x. Nice , numorous and quite realistic write, Deb