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Loose Louise

There was a young man in a pickle His girlfriend Louise was quite fickle When the test came out blue She told him it's not you With others I played slap and tickle * for Deborah Guzzi's Limerick contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2011 4:01:00 PM
One of my favorite games "slap & tickle!" congrad's on your win! now return to your childhood and write one for the kiddies about an animal! Start da DUM da, da DUM da, da DUM da...this time! Light & Love
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Date: 1/19/2011 11:55:00 AM
Very funny, Deb! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations Deb, on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:13:00 PM
hahaha. This one is GREAT!! congratulations
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Date: 1/18/2011 3:31:00 PM
Love it Deb. Oh my! this must have happened quite a few times in history. Many congrats on your win in Deborah's contest....:)
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Date: 1/18/2011 12:13:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your big win in the Limerick contest by Debbie... a great one my friend and a chart topper too.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:10:00 AM
Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/17/2011 9:40:00 AM
This is very funny. Good luck in the contest. KC
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:55:00 AM
Another awesome entry Deb and such a fun read as well ..good luck my friend in the contest ... Deb will just luv... and I am still smiling too...
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:02:00 PM
what a punchline of an ending, deb... laughing alone here; amazing! best of winning luck in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:26:00 PM
yes, thanks for the comments. I have made it to one x. Nice , numorous and quite realistic write, Deb
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