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unbridled blubbers, blurted sobs and lips loosened, untie hold on tongue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/6/2017 4:43:00 PM
I must admit I've sunk a few ships in my early days! Great senryu, John!
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Date: 6/6/2017 4:29:00 PM
I love that first line, John. Well done!
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