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I think that I shall never see A poem lovely as a tree… —Joyce Kilmer
LOOSE LEAFS In the dusting of the Springtime, blush petals fall - sobriquet-youth. Scented thoughts of yesterday, rhyme elementary, with loose leafs.* Poems Sweet Honesty, presume. Honeysuckle lines with hair pulls. The binder, neat, with florid bloom. Exaltation of the classics. It’s only in looking behind, observation of curvy tree, wholly beautifully designed - the step by step instruction wings. With irregular ruler edge, falls sweetest words along the ledge.

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Date: 5/22/2023 7:03:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Kim, and that quote from Joyce Kilmer’s poem, trees are fascinating to me, love them. All the best for the contest… Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2023 6:29:00 AM
I love trees too! So happy to have a yard full of them! God bless!
Date: 5/20/2023 5:02:00 AM
I like how you adorned the prompt into a superb poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2023 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! I appreciate it!
Date: 5/20/2023 1:31:00 AM
Loved your poem, dear Kim. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2023 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 5/19/2023 4:21:00 PM
Magnificant imagery, Kim. Tough form, but well written. Good luck in the contest! Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2023 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!

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