Loos, France, Fall 1915

Slaughter amongst the slag heaps
Bodies bowed over barb wire
Screeching, screaming
artillery arching above
soon to descend
amputating limbs
shattering skulls
blood and brains
splattering stains on
comrades too close
mixing with the mud

Grappling with grenades
Supplies short
London, Lancashire
and Lancaster lads
battling like beasts within
that Hohenzollern horror
hoping to hold it
Bayonets tear through torsos
Poison perfumes the air
wafting on the wind
back where it was birthed
menacing their own men

In Cite St. Auguste
citizens burrow into basements
as if Armageddon has arrived
or roam the streets like revenants
blank and bleary eyed
Their conscious mind
cannot comprehend
the malevolent madness of
what was once believed to be
a sane and civilized society

In the cemetery are set up
machine gun nests
among the monuments
As shells pound the ground
the dead are dredged up
as if to welcome the
new arrivals lying in piles
A sacred space sullied
by sadism
Schadenfreude

Flares flicker
Very Lights
to continue the fight
throughout the night
No rest for weary warriors
as no reserves arrive
to relieve them
Poor planning on the part
of generals pushing papers
and marking maps that
have no relevance to reality
ordering insanity

It has been more than
a year since Ferdinand fell
and Princip with his pistol
opened wide the gates of hell

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Date: 4/28/2021 5:30:00 AM
You have captured the evil of the First World War with great descriptiveness here.
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Date: 4/27/2021 11:36:00 AM
Well done, indeed! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 4/27/2021 7:49:00 AM
You captured the horrors of ww1 well in your verse Angela. Tom PS, welcome to soup.
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Date: 4/27/2021 1:29:00 PM
Thanks. I'm a history buff and do historical reenactments, mostly late 18th and 19th century, but WW1 has always interested me. It was really the intro to the modern era, the transition. It started with horses and ended with tanks as I say. Sherman said war is hell but I can't imagine a war that was more truly hell than WW1.
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