Loop To Loop and Advice For Men Who Love Loopy Women

don't look so surprised
                                                       
                                        nothing but predictable
                                                       
                                           hold on for the ride












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Barden Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Aha! Well-said, friend! :-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Thank you hugs and giggles! <3
George   Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Good one, Maureen.
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January 6, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Thank you :)
Swartz Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:03 AM
You always give great advice Maureen!
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January 3, 2018 at 12:33 PM
Giggles ;) xomo! <3
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Woman: The greatest and most amazing riddle of all! I love It! Happy New Year dearest Maureen!
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January 3, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Cheers my dear! Happy New Year blessings to you my friend xomo!
Tripp Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 11:13 AM
But a rollercoaster of a thrill. Life would be boring without the loops. Lol. Great advice.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:32 PM
I can only imagine lol! I heard once that the difference between men and women is women have fat days, men have fat years... They can be just as loopy, the loops just so indiscernibly big. ;)
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January 1, 2018 at 7:05 AM
This is indeed cleverly done, Maureen...ingeniously witty - lol! My best wishes for your New Year. Very warmest regards! :) john
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January 3, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Thank younJohn :) All the best! xomo
Wigley Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 2:01 AM
I think you may have met one of my exes, Maureen. Great Senryu, good luck! Viv x
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January 3, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Giggle, I'm not sayin' ;)
Vaso Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 10:23 PM
LOL Loved this!!!! Been there too!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Part of the human experience :) cheers my dear! xomo
Gauthier Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 9:36 PM
Awesome. Buyer beware! Best wishes, Maureen.
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January 3, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Lol! Thank you Lovely :) xomo!
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 7:13 PM
this is FANTASTIC, Maureen. what a cleverly done senryu!!
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January 3, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Thank you so much Andrea! I was of mind to enter it in Brenda's men's advice contest lol ;) xomo!
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 6:29 PM
lol Mo! Happy new year its officially 2018!:-0 hugs jan x
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January 3, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Happy New Year Hugs!!! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 6:23 PM
Cute!
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January 3, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Cheers lovely :)
Bauer Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 4:51 PM
great advice, maureen! happy new year to you...
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January 3, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Giggle ;) it's pretty applicable! Happy New Year to you Ilene, much love xomo!
Johnson Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Lesson: expect the unexpected and then you're never surprised. After all, how boring if you aren't. :)
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January 3, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Exactly! Dress for the weather ;)
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December 31, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Hahaha!
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December 31, 2017 at 11:01 AM
;) <3
One Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Sounds like some ride..
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December 31, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Life IS a fabulous ride!
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