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Looking Outside

Looking out my window I see someone there Its a male figure His back is towards me Staring at him a while I wonder why he is there He turns head to the right Then turns head to the left Changes to face straight ahead To change and stare back From where he came As I watch him behind glass I wonder who he is waiting for Is it me? He is searching for? A small voice speaks to me "Turn around see the window" "It is me your looking for?"

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Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 4/19/2023 11:04:00 AM

Hello Darlene. I loved reading your mysterious Poem LOOKING OUTSIDE. Kept up the good writing. Peace my friend. Vb Rogers blk panther

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2023 10:53:00 AM

Hello Val, Thank you for the lovely comment. I will. Peace my friend. \Darlene/

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 4/16/2023 3:08:00 PM

that's quite intriguing..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2023 5:00:00 AM

Hello Nancy, yes it is intriguing. With a mystery. Hugs./Darlene\

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/14/2023 12:57:00 PM

Hello my friend, A great write Darlene. I love the mustery in it and description. Hugs forever, Pangie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2023 2:54:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes a mystery there for sure. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/13/2023 1:27:00 PM

Interesting concept, Darlene...sort of like a "peeping Tom" in reverse. And I agree with Evelyn re the "mystery" aspect.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2023 10:30:00 AM

Hello Jim, I agree with Evelyn, it is sort of like a mystery. Who was he looking for? Looking around every which way, and back from where he came. A mystery for sure. Enjoy your day my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/13/2023 11:36:00 AM

An intriguing and enjoyable poem, tinged with mystery. Nicely written, Darlene. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2023 11:39:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, Thank you for the lovelt comment. Hugs. /Darlene/ Hugs.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/9/2023 6:45:00 PM

What a great finish to your poem, Darlene. Love it! Thanks, gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/10/2023 5:36:00 AM

Hello Gershon, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/9/2023 1:25:00 AM

A lovely poem as if on a long lost friend or stranger that can turn into a friend. You captured it superly. Kudos! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too"

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/9/2023 4:17:00 AM

Hello S.Zaynab, yes I will red your poems. Thank you fr the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friendd.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/8/2023 8:27:00 AM

A wonderful story/write/ending. I wish you would write more. Have a great/fun/blessed day writing away..............

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2023 10:34:00 AM

Hello Paula, I will write more poems like that Paula. I will create more poems like that. Have a blessed day Paula. Your friend, /Darlene/

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/7/2023 10:28:00 AM

"I wonder who he is waiting for Is it me? He is searching for? A small voice speaks to me "Turn around see the window" "It is me your looking for?"" -- Purely beautiful! Love it!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2023 11:20:00 AM

Hello Joe, Thank you Joe. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 3/6/2023 12:58:00 AM

Hello Darlene, a beautiful poem!Blessings Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/6/2023 11:52:00 AM

Hello Mulu, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.