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Looking Outside

Looking out my window
I see someone there
Its  a male figure
His back is towards me
Staring at him a while

I wonder why he is there
He turns head to the right
Then turns head to the left
Changes to face straight ahead
To change and stare back
From where he came

As I watch him behind glass
I wonder who he is waiting for
Is it me? He is searching for?
A small voice speaks to me
"Turn around see the window"
"It is me your looking for?"

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Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther Date: 4/19/2023 11:04:00 AM Hello Darlene. I loved reading your mysterious Poem LOOKING OUTSIDE. Kept up the good writing. Peace my friend. Vb Rogers blk panther Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/20/2023 10:53:00 AM Hello Val, Thank you for the lovely comment. I will. Peace my friend. \Darlene/

Nancy Kaufman Date: 4/16/2023 3:08:00 PM that's quite intriguing.. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/17/2023 5:00:00 AM Hello Nancy, yes it is intriguing. With a mystery. Hugs./Darlene\

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/14/2023 12:57:00 PM Hello my friend, A great write Darlene. I love the mustery in it and description. Hugs forever, Pangie Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/14/2023 2:54:00 PM Hello Panagiota, Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes a mystery there for sure. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx

Jim Slaughter Date: 3/13/2023 1:27:00 PM Interesting concept, Darlene...sort of like a "peeping Tom" in reverse. And I agree with Evelyn re the "mystery" aspect. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/14/2023 10:30:00 AM Hello Jim, I agree with Evelyn, it is sort of like a mystery. Who was he looking for? Looking around every which way, and back from where he came. A mystery for sure. Enjoy your day my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/13/2023 11:36:00 AM An intriguing and enjoyable poem, tinged with mystery. Nicely written, Darlene. :) Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/13/2023 11:39:00 AM Hello Evelyn, Thank you for the lovelt comment. Hugs. /Darlene/ Hugs.

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/9/2023 6:45:00 PM What a great finish to your poem, Darlene. Love it! Thanks, gw Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/10/2023 5:36:00 AM Hello Gershon, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 3/9/2023 1:25:00 AM A lovely poem as if on a long lost friend or stranger that can turn into a friend. You captured it superly. Kudos! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too" Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/9/2023 4:17:00 AM Hello S.Zaynab, yes I will red your poems. Thank you fr the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friendd.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/8/2023 8:27:00 AM A wonderful story/write/ending. I wish you would write more. Have a great/fun/blessed day writing away.............. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/8/2023 10:34:00 AM Hello Paula, I will write more poems like that Paula. I will create more poems like that. Have a blessed day Paula. Your friend, /Darlene/

Joe Dimino Date: 3/7/2023 10:28:00 AM "I wonder who he is waiting for Is it me? He is searching for? A small voice speaks to me "Turn around see the window" "It is me your looking for?"" -- Purely beautiful! Love it! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/7/2023 11:20:00 AM Hello Joe, Thank you Joe. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Mulu Magdalinos Date: 3/6/2023 12:58:00 AM Hello Darlene, a beautiful poem!Blessings Darlene! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/6/2023 11:52:00 AM Hello Mulu, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Sotto Poet Date: 3/5/2023 10:12:00 AM Darlene, you have an eye for capturing the perfect moment. You have vividly described the view outside your house. Very nice work! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/6/2023 11:54:00 AM Hello Sotto, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2023 8:12:00 AM - A pleasant surprise outside your window, Darlene :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/5/2023 8:26:00 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, Yes a plea/Hugs.sant surprise outside my window. Hugs.

Daniel Turner Date: 3/4/2023 7:24:00 PM Sounds like a game of hide and seek, Darlene, except creepier. I enjoyed reading you this evening:) Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/5/2023 7:41:00 AM Hello Daniel, Yes I agree it does sound like a game of hide and seek. Also creepier. Thank you for the comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Fin Chuuk Date: 3/4/2023 1:52:00 PM So was it you he was looking for you? Hope all goes well, Darlene :) Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/5/2023 7:43:00 AM Hello Fin, I have no idea what he was looking for. I never found out. Enjoy your day Fin my friend.

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/4/2023 12:44:00 PM Moments well captured, Darlene. Your imagery brings forth the scene as you explored through your window. Well written! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/5/2023 7:45:00 AM Hello Vijay, Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. I hope all is well with you.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/4/2023 11:46:00 AM Intriguing ~ hugs Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/4/2023 12:22:00 PM Hello Kim, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.