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Date written: 02/04/2025

gosh, look at the time!

he's gotta go
immediately!
wherever he's headed 
punctuality is a must,
he can't just go yet...
his mind 
in utter disarray,
repeatedly screaming...

"where's my damn keys?!"

as he goes on a tear 
for his misplaced keys,
he implores time to slow 
to a c r a w l
but she gives him the kiss off.
she's laced up her running shoes 
as he searches 
frantically;
his inner voice...
wailing like a banshee,
ocean of tumult violently churns 
in the pit of his gut.
a mouse scurrying 
room to room
wreaking royal havoc;
clothes flying here and there,
the couch flipped upside down.
his impatience 
giving way to panic.
meanwhile,
time's already on the run...
daring him...

" catch me, if you can!"

yet the borrowing gopher 
paces around the house,
driving himself crazy, then...
he swings his front door open;
sad eureka!
there it is...
on the other side of the door 
his keys dangle
in the keyhole.
time now mocking him...
he's late as can be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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