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Looking For a Perfect Rhyme

Feeling sublime looking for a perfect rhyme
rejecting halftime, bedtime, downtime
considering the pleasant tinkle of a chime
making faces at the sound of slime and grime
settling for a garden of lime and thyme.

August 20,  2017

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Valsa George Date: 10/20/2022 9:24:00 AM For listening to the pleasant tinkle of a chime we poets are ready to risk our bed time and downtime. Sweetly rhyming and chiming ! Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 8/21/2017 6:57:00 AM Congratulations, Vijay. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 8:15:00 AM You mean about the other poem--thanks Subimal!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/20/2017 9:03:00 PM Love it! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 6:41:00 AM Thanks Kim--love your feedback!

Emile Pinet Date: 8/20/2017 4:46:00 PM Your rhyming may not be perfect, but it is very good and the theme flows throughout the work. Emile. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/20/2017 6:36:00 PM Thanks for your visit Emile--appreciate your feedback.

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/20/2017 1:00:00 PM invigorating show of a rhyming technique, vijay... thumbs up!..huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/20/2017 1:03:00 PM Thank you so much nette, for your lovely comments!

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 8/20/2017 9:11:00 AM This is clever and well written. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/20/2017 9:43:00 AM Thanks Dale--love your feedback!

Tim Smith Date: 8/20/2017 7:52:00 AM A prime example of poetically injected rhyme...well done Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/20/2017 8:23:00 AM Thanks Tim--love your thoughtful comments, as always!

Heidi Sands Date: 8/20/2017 7:23:00 AM Hi Vijay, well you did just fine with this Rhyme!! Well done and I enjoyed it today :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/20/2017 8:21:00 AM Always delighted by your visit, and your lovely comments, Heidi!

Probir Gupta Date: 8/20/2017 6:34:00 AM Indeed a choice prime!... Nice poem ... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/20/2017 8:19:00 AM Thanks Probir--love your comments, always!

Russell Sivey Date: 8/20/2017 6:29:00 AM I think you have found plenty to rhyme! This is an awesome write about rhyming and that which is found in between! Slime and Grime, oh boy, what fun! You have surely found a way to make me smile this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/20/2017 8:18:00 AM Love your comments, always Russell! You bring me smile.