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Looking For a Perfect Rhyme

Feeling sublime looking for a perfect rhyme rejecting halftime, bedtime, downtime considering the pleasant tinkle of a chime making faces at the sound of slime and grime settling for a garden of lime and thyme. August 20, 2017

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Valsa George

Date: 10/20/2022 9:24:00 AM

For listening to the pleasant tinkle of a chime we poets are ready to risk our bed time and downtime. Sweetly rhyming and chiming !

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/21/2017 6:57:00 AM

Congratulations, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2017 8:15:00 AM

You mean about the other poem--thanks Subimal!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2017 9:03:00 PM

Love it!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2017 6:41:00 AM

Thanks Kim--love your feedback!

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/20/2017 4:46:00 PM

Your rhyming may not be perfect, but it is very good and the theme flows throughout the work. Emile.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2017 6:36:00 PM

Thanks for your visit Emile--appreciate your feedback.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/20/2017 1:00:00 PM

invigorating show of a rhyming technique, vijay... thumbs up!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2017 1:03:00 PM

Thank you so much nette, for your lovely comments!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 8/20/2017 9:11:00 AM

This is clever and well written.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2017 9:43:00 AM

Thanks Dale--love your feedback!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2017 7:52:00 AM

A prime example of poetically injected rhyme...well done

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2017 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Tim--love your thoughtful comments, as always!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/20/2017 7:23:00 AM

Hi Vijay, well you did just fine with this Rhyme!! Well done and I enjoyed it today :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2017 8:21:00 AM

Always delighted by your visit, and your lovely comments, Heidi!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/20/2017 6:34:00 AM

Indeed a choice prime!... Nice poem ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2017 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Probir--love your comments, always!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/20/2017 6:29:00 AM

I think you have found plenty to rhyme! This is an awesome write about rhyming and that which is found in between! Slime and Grime, oh boy, what fun! You have surely found a way to make me smile this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2017 8:18:00 AM

Love your comments, always Russell! You bring me smile.