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Looking Beyond Myself

If I should discover that mysterious genie bottle by any chance, And was granted three wishes that my existence they might enhance, It would be very tempting to wish for fame and all the world's pelf! But, such an opportunity would require that I look well beyond myself! I would wish for PERMANENT PEACE in this troubled sphere. That Freedom's Bell would peal out its joyous news for all to hear! That tyranny would be trampled and that those who foment strife, Would simply leave other folks in peace to pursue the abundant life! I would wish for the elimination of all HUNGER and DISEASE, And that pain and suffering, with heartfelt compassion could ease. That rampant homelessness and despair would forever cease, And that brotherhood and concern for others would increase! I would wish for INTEGRITY in government beginning with our own. That governments in all nations and at all levels would set the tone! That world-leaders would heed the Prophet Isaiah's sage injunction, To seriously reason together - perhaps the world would better function! The likelihood of this mere mortal being faced with such a decision, Is rather slim and an awesome responsibility that I cannot envision! But would not one be rather remiss to skirt such an opportunity, To better the lives of His people and the worldwide community? Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved) Honorable Mention in Amy Green's If I Could Have 3 Wishes Contest

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Date: 5/2/2010 7:09:00 AM
Three wonderful wishes Robert, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:12:00 AM
congrats on your HM (:
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:38:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your HM in Amy's Wishes contest with this magnificent presentation shared so beautifully with all of us... enjoy your special honor...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:33:00 AM
I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Robert. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2010 9:58:00 PM
Great wishes I'm sure it will do well in the contest- I gota rethink mine now lol
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Date: 4/21/2010 5:15:00 PM
Great writing, Robert. Good luck in Amy's contest ... this is a winner for sure !!
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:28:00 PM
Great job, Bob. Best of luck in the contest. I think you have a good shot.
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Date: 4/21/2010 3:29:00 PM
Three terrific wishes, Bob! Peace would be my first priority too. After we achieve world peace, I think hunger and disease could be more easily eliminated by nations working together. And right now "integrity in government" does seem like WISHFUL THINKING. Wishing you much luck in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2010 2:20:00 PM
I love it Bob H. now we must have the same idea about a genie ..The only thing differ is the way we think. I got to hand it to you Bob. you are awesome. I did not think about them Wishes on my contest entry..Take care ..p.d.
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