Looking Back Through Dim and Misty Eyes

A veteran of World War Two sat by his hearth thinking back on the war.
Through dim and misty eyes he recalled his buddies and the horrible gore.
He wondered why he survived to come home when others forfeited life,
In The Battle of the Bulge where he was a rifleman midst that brutal strife.

He recalled too many nights shivering in his foxhole with freezing feet,
Trying to keep awake guarding his post in the blinding snow and sleet.
From afar could be heard thundering cannon that was aimed his way.
"Lord", he prayed "please let me survive this night to live another day!"

He recalled being scantily clothed - hot coffee and food was very rare.
He damned those in the rear for his plight who didn't seem to care.
On Christmas Day those in the rear dined on turkey with lots to spare.
For Christmas dinner he and his buddies ate C-rations for holiday fare.

His eyes misted when he thought of frozen heroes lying in the snow,
Their grieving next-of-kin - the little kids whose dads they'd never know.
But in the midst of battle he must put all such gruesome thoughts aside,
And not let his brothers down - those brave men who soldiered at his side.

With other old veterans he talked with kids in school lest they forget,
Telling them how much is owed to those who paid that final debt!
He buried his face in gnarled hands that once held the terrible weapons of war,
Weeping unabashedly pleading, "Please God, no more strife forever more!"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/16/2011 8:06:00 PM
Thank you Robert for keeping those men up front where they deserve to be forever, and thank you for your proud service to our country. "Semper Fi" I love your artistry and spirit and thank you for your comments on my poem about my Blind Brother In Law... I salute you..... James Gooch
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:58:00 PM
We owe so much to so many, may their memories never be lost, if only the youth today knew what was the cost............ I hope you have peace now.,,,Elizabeth
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:32:00 PM
One to help us recall their great sacrifices for us Robert. We civilians can never truly know their suffering!
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Date: 6/16/2011 4:10:00 PM
It really is a powerful poem, a lot of people would benefit from reading this poem--it has a lot to say and to warn everyone about! I tried to send you Soup Mail, but for some reason there is no send button to hit, I hit the validate button and my email just sits there, unsent...I've used all kinds of email formats for years but this one has me really confused, and it's probably something stupid i didn't see.
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Date: 6/16/2011 1:28:00 PM
Looking for your new poem, Bob. Let me know when it's posted. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2011 11:09:00 AM
Powerful write, my friend. Thanks for your kind wishes : )
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:41:00 PM
Yes mate we had men who suffered the pain, men who seemed right as rain , and a lot who just went crazy. My old dad was a story teller, who spoke of the sadist Jap the fella, but he was tired of the butcher shop too. GREAT POEM MATE! on ya mate, Don
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:13:00 PM
a sad write, but freedom is not free. but some wars could be prevented, others can not, world war 2 was one war that could not have been prevented, some wars go on way to long, but the bible says there will always be wars and rumors of war, til the end of time. this one was a tear jerker, a great piece. My brother was in the Navy during world war 2 and my uncle in the army, if it was not for you guys, there may not be a USA.
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:45:00 PM
Got goosebumps as I read this Robert, true present generation should know what it cost, what their granddads,their comrades and families suffered then..that is history for us but,to think you were part of that history,right there in middle of the battle field of WWII..there's much we can know from you, learn from you...huggs
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Date: 6/14/2011 4:03:00 AM
A genuinely moving piece, Bob. My father fought in WWII, in North Africa, and then Italy. He never talked about it much, but from the little he said, the horror came through. I know he lost some best buddies at Cassino. We can live in hope that world peace will one day become a reality. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Robert .
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Date: 6/13/2011 1:18:00 PM
An emotional and real post of thought dear poet ! Great write Robert ! Have a wonderful week sir ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/13/2011 11:30:00 AM
Very expressive and emotive work..It is hard to fanthom what our military personal faced in combat action...You have expressed it very well..Sara
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:18:00 AM
Bob, you bring this soldier to life for us and remind us how difficult it was to live on the front lines. Imagine having C-rations on Christmas! Soldiers are the ones who seem most opposed to war because they have experienced these hardships first-hand. If more of our elected leaders had served, I believe we'd get involved in fewer wars. Genuinely moving write, my friend. Thank you for serving our country. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:41:00 PM
a shining star poem Bob ..a stunning write on the woes of war and vets luv.. did u hear the story of the vet who tried to get his medals for Purple Heart and some others from WW 2 and the government just got them to him and he died over the weekend.. we must value these brave souls forever .. awesome my friend.. perfect in fact luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:20:00 PM
Oh my Bob, this is just a wonderful, sad, write.. Ill bet the Stars and Stripes would love to publish this. What a wonderful poet you are. BG
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Date: 6/12/2011 6:47:00 PM
Awesome piece, my friend. Vivid picture of what war is like for our fighting troops. God bless all those who went thru it. Especially those who gave their lives. Outstanding posting, Sarge. Nice going. Best to you guys. Glad your physical had good results. Ralphie
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