Looking At the Bar
Looking at the bay:
Standing near the ocean,
Looking helpless at the waves,
Remembering the time spent with you,
When everything felt so new
Love was the only reason of life,
Love was the reason I survived,
Then why that love turned to pain,
And left some silent tears in vain
Is love so painful in life,
Then there is no point in all that strive
Feeling unpleasant on being alive!
what view do u have to that.
By Otieno Elvis Gikoi
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