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Sara Jama's Serpents, Scorpions, Owls Contest...10 Apr 25 * support the cause for environmental protection ... the tiny pygmy owl , among a few others. is nearing extinction due to dangerous habitat, illegal logging, climate change, and lack of food.
When nightfall dips in palest of gold I feel a sense of indignity, As owl's melody loses its eloquence Through the absence of a safe abode; Where quietude calls for avian coos The kind which never seeks to intrude… And its orbed eyes larger than neons, freeze In need of natue's hued, aerial parade--- Startled, bird's forest trail is washed out By mourning dew of poison Denying the barren woods of nourishment while allowing thieves to skin owl feathers, mangled talons like so, wasted --- Wise keeper of secrets, hushing the noise. Life marvels at your nocturnal guardianship yet, this world shares not your moonlit toots lithography of hills no longer owns your delicate interludes of silence... Man ravages bird navel, flesh , and plumes For trading quests, for self- interest --- Can this earthly slaughter cease sucking nectar soil of birds dry? Somehow, I still hail the dwindling number of hooting owls Which believes that the next generations will wander on an environ, Soaring their wings... joyously free at last.

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Date: 4/13/2025 5:39:00 PM
Dear Nette, your emotive and sensory imagery combines to create a potent, heart wrenching piece. I wish mankind would feel veneration for all living things instead of exploiting Nature for their own greed. Thank you for raising awareness of the Pygmy owl’s plight. Congratulations for your success in Sara’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/10/2025 2:35:00 PM
Moving...I found my heart aching for the owls, and I am glad you wrote this. <3
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Date: 4/10/2025 11:36:00 AM
Thanks for this poem Nette. It makes me think how intricacy of the web of life has so much value, and we're damaging it at quite a pace. Eventually, we'll pay for it, but it's been quite a path to riches for some. The disappearing owls are but one sign. We will all hail these creatures. Take care.
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Date: 4/10/2025 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in my contest. I love the depth of your write and the unique way you took my prompt. The sacred creature being destroyed by humans thinking they own everything. Your wordplay and use of brutal imagery is beautifully bittersweet. "Man ravages bird navel, flesh , and plumes For trading quests, for self- interest --- Can this earthly slaughter cease sucking nectar soil of birds dry?," is my favourite in the poem.
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Date: 4/10/2025 9:02:00 AM
Dear nette, You have a way with words, so exquisite and so captivating! I absolutely love the way youv written this and the cadence and how melodious it is to the eyes and soul of the reader. I especially love "yet, this world shares not your moonlit toots lithography of hills no longer owns your delicate interludes of silence..." how impeccable ! Love this! Congratulations on your placement in saras contest, sending you light always
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Date: 4/10/2025 3:01:00 AM
nature is so precious, owls are a part of this permanent mystery, i love hearing them before dawn, great poetry my friend
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Date: 4/9/2025 5:48:00 PM
Once more with feeling: Yor eloquently crafted plea for the owl resonates so with me. Thank you, Gershon
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