Look Up Into the Milky Way --- a Nonsensical Poem

Look up into the Milky Way 
Streaming down the sky to the bay 
Connected by sea to Skara Brae. 
Do those ruins contain some clay? 
On that faraway land, are there any dogs stray? 
If I go there, will a beautiful girl be coming, 
Serving me coffee with a splendid tray 
On a sunny, refreshing day? 
Will the girl be pretty enough to give me an impression 
That strikes me as if with a fresh water spray? 
Then, will I be filled with such deep emotion 
That makes me shout, "Yay"? 
Will I be stunned, having nothing to say? 
Or will I start dancing as in ballet?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/19/2017 7:21:00 AM
Nonsensical but well done; have fun with words. Namaste.
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Date: 8/20/2017 12:46:00 AM
Thank you, Phil.
Date: 8/17/2017 8:38:00 AM
Cool poem. I like it, cool say.
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Date: 8/17/2017 8:34:00 PM
Oh, thank you, Ronald.
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