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opportunity in the window of my soul- as tomorrow dawns Inspired by Gareth's photo

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Date: 4/18/2010 9:34:00 AM
Well done, Brian! I also saw a window, but failed to recognize the opportunity before me and you seized so magnificently!
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:22:00 AM
Congrats Brian on your winning poem in Gareth's contest... another wonderful Haiku from your gifted pen and another win to enjoy...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/18/2010 5:43:00 AM
Very nice, Brian. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/12/2010 2:47:00 PM
Exciting Haiku Brian and Gareth will surely have his hands full judging this contest.. good luck with this one ...already a winner...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:10:00 PM
Good way to think of something for this challenge. It is too hard for me. I just want to be visual and all the good lines are already taken for the visual aspect of it! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:15:00 PM
I love the line.. the window of my soul... love constance
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:10:00 PM
enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 4/11/2010 2:32:00 AM
thank you for supporting my contest, Brian
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Date: 4/11/2010 2:09:00 AM
Great write that should be in the winner's circle...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:52:00 AM
Nice image painted with few words, maybe a Senyru because "soul" pertains to humans.
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:19:00 AM
Great job, brian!
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