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JCB Bruhl's 'As long as I see the sky'

Monoku contest ~ November 5, 2024

as long as I see the sky I know I'm alive ~ hoping to survive

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/2/2024 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Look To The SKY" write. Great Picture... Enjoy your day/win....................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 9:29:00 AM

Excellent. It's kind of the same message if mine said a bit differently. Congrats

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 6:19:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. hope it is. lovely. cheers.

Terry Flood

Date: 11/7/2024 4:46:00 PM

Keep the hope alive, Lin. Things can only get….hmmm. Enjoyed your sky gazing moment. Terry

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2024 12:29:00 AM

Thanks for not completing that line, Terry. Things look worse to me each time I sign in to PS lately. Thanks for liking this Monoku. We plod on.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/6/2024 3:38:00 AM

Lin, I just love the tone of your Monoku! Optimism and hope! Good luck and Happy Wednesday xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 11/6/2024 4:17:00 AM

Far better to be optimistic that filled with doom and gloom, Thank you, Mike.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/5/2024 9:54:00 PM

Dear Lin, a resonating monoku, so well written, i have been there many times, to feel alive, sky gazing, as clouds move , i feel like theres still hope. Beautiful picture to go with it too. Pleasure reading~ sending you light always

Lin Lane
Date: 11/6/2024 4:17:00 AM

It has a way of keeping us humble, doesn't it, Ink. Thanks so much for your remarks.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/5/2024 4:59:00 PM

Lovely Lin so many writers have entered this contest this is my eight time commenting on submissions. Best of luck to you and thank you for sharing. Hugs.

Michael Tor
Date: 11/6/2024 3:21:00 PM

I haven't entered a contest in many years Lin. I appreciate your kind words. Thank you maybe someday I will. I just write for fun and expression. I do not consider myself a poet I am just a guy who likes to share ideas and entertain people. I prefer telling stories that impact peoples lives...

Lin Lane
Date: 11/6/2024 4:16:00 AM

You're a good example of one who supports his fellow poets, Michael. Have you tried one. Thanks for the many fine comments you leave for me. hugs

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/5/2024 3:23:00 PM

A tricky monoku to navigate Lin, with only ten syllables and a title to play around with, you have done a great job and made a profound statement in the process, all the best for contest, I best get my monoku hat back on, hmmm I have an idea I’ll sleep on it, and hope I’ll survive til morning! Cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/5/2024 3:44:00 PM

I’ll take your advice Lin I have the monoku saved I’ll sleep on the title, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 11/5/2024 3:33:00 PM

Write your idea down, David. I have you to thank for whetting my interest in the form, specifically rhyming ones. Thank you, David.