Look But Don'T Touch

Watch out for a pervert named Jack.
He cannot keep his hands off a rack.
The rule goes as such,
you can look but don't touch
and beware of husbands on attack.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
Nair Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 1:50 AM
Love this funny piece. Congrats..:) Jag
Merryman Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 8:20 PM
Good one, Rhonda. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "#2 Another Crazy & Fun Limerick" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 9:38 PM
VERY nicely done and won, Rhonda. I like yours MUCHO
Taylor Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 6:35 PM
Congrats, Rhonda. Nice going. Great job. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Grisetti Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 6:08 PM
Laughing still. Congratulations on your win.
Song Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 1:57 PM
Congrats Rhonda! :) Gwendolen
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June 11, 2012 at 12:39 PM
RHONDA, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK,,, XOX~PD
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June 7, 2012 at 8:50 PM
WAHOO, man that is a funny one. Thanks for the mom advice! I've enrolled her in a cooperative preschool for fall and we are both looking forward to it. I will be assisting in the room once a month, so I'll be getting a few hours a week to myself, to clean and just "be." She's so ready for the experience and I think of all the positive things you said about your son's preschool... it really inspired me. I sent you a soup mail. Hope it was okay? Planning to send another shortly. HUGS!!
A   Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 4:48 PM
Rhonda, lol, maybe limericks are not fun for young ones.. your very entertaining,..pd
Sivey Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:41 AM
You sure are coming along with these awesome limericks Rhonda! I am enjoying each one better and better as they come along! This is a glorious and spectacular write my friend! Great Work!!
Dailey Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Love to read limericks - keep them coming. Mike
Peranteau Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 3:37 AM
A serious message for the souls whose hands follow their eyes commands ! Stern write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Rhonda....much love, james
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 3:29 AM
Take care of Jack....Rhonda! - ...lol... - oxox Anne-Lise
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June 6, 2012 at 2:30 AM
LOL VERY FUNNY!!HAHAHA
Williams Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 2:10 AM
Rhonda, all of the 'Jack's' will now be saying 'why me'? love it..David
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