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Longing: Lust and Love

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For cinquain contest on longing

Longing Biological imperative Driven to reproduce The desire to take Lust Longing Spiritual connectivity Not selfishly motivated The desire to give Love

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/6/2015 12:42:00 AM

One of my favorites, Mark...congrats on your first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:14:00 PM

Mark,, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/2/2015 4:33:00 PM

Longing, lust and love..you had a winner from the start. Congrats. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 1:58:00 PM

I like how you did two types, and put the good one last! Congrats for your well deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 1:58:00 PM

What i was implying: saving the best for last!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 11:29:00 AM

many congrats on your win mark:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 8:00:00 AM

Hi Mark...may I first of all wish you all the best for 2015. Read your clever Cinquain...like the way your present the two contrasting images. Congrats on your merited 1st placing. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 2:58:00 AM

Great work Mark , congrats on the win...huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 9:29:00 PM

Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Mark

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/16/2014 12:27:00 AM

Wise words with great insight, Mark! The similarities and differences are in the underlying motivation...good luck in the contest...hugs, Rhonda