Longing: Lust and Love

Longing 
Biological imperative  
Driven to reproduce 
The desire to take 
Lust 


Longing 
Spiritual connectivity  
Not selfishly motivated 
The desire to give 
Love

desiredevotionlonginglovelustcinquain

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

January 6, 2015 at 12:42 AM

One of my favorites, Mark...congrats on your first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

January 2, 2015 at 11:14 PM

Mark,, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Barbara Gorelick

January 2, 2015 at 4:33 PM

Longing, lust and love..you had a winner from the start. Congrats. BG

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2015 at 1:58 PM

What i was implying: saving the best for last!

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2015 at 1:58 PM

I like how you did two types, and put the good one last! Congrats for your well deserved win.

Jan Allison

January 2, 2015 at 11:29 AM

many congrats on your win mark:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

January 2, 2015 at 8:00 AM

Hi Mark...may I first of all wish you all the best for 2015. Read your clever Cinquain...like the way your present the two contrasting images. Congrats on your merited 1st placing. // paul