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Longing For You

Longing For You Longing for your sweet embrace your love and beautiful grace The touch of lips so divine the thrill of you being mine I touch all your sweet spots your body gives me the hots Tan softly wrapping sexy curves when with you I am all nerves Feel of your whispering vow that you belong to me now Your sexy body naked in bed your not waiting to be wed Your touch, while so divine Simply Stops this heart of mine I send you this loving letter For worse, or even better Within your kiss, my breath flees, I fall upon, weakened knees Your hand, gently stroking my hair You freeze me upon a glare May be wrong, but not tonight Surely, God sees, love so right You're not mine, but you are tonight Make love with our hearts wrapped tight A collaboration effort Robert Lindley and Kathryn Ramirez 09-19-2014 Syllables Per Line: 7 7 8 7 0 7 7 8 7 0 7 7 8 7 0 0 7 7 8 7 0 7 7 8 7 0 7 7 8 7 Total # Syllables: 174 Total # Lines: 30 (Including empty lines) Total # Words: 140 Note-- This as is meets my new form without the ending couplet due to the opening 12 lines being answered by Kathryn's 12 line reply.. Robert

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/21/2014 11:58:00 AM

Thanks for the great comments!! My teammate on this write did a truly wonderful job and impressed me greatly with her talent and ability to write such a beautiful reply. Her pen truly sings...

Gry Christensen

Date: 9/20/2014 8:52:00 AM

A very successful collaboration! :) So much passion, love and emotion written out equally well. Nice rhyming too! Good to read your poetry again!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/20/2014 12:56:00 AM

I did not realize that this was a collaboration until the end, which is always a good sign of a very well written poem.... This is such a passionate and tender write. Well done to you both!

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/20/2014 12:31:00 AM

I enjoyed this write-up, how can one write so touching and that too so simple... Honestly, i read it thrice..... you are a great poet indeed..This form created by you seems fascinating, i think people here should give a try or may be you offer a contest on this form.. Malik.