Longing For You

Sunlight kissed the horizon; our young age, leaving dots and dashes upon our crisp page. Wild flower and Wonders, we both did grow; watching seasons change from spring to snow. Sunlight above and the noon overhead; teenage verbiage and words left unsaid. Wild flower and Wonders were left behind. Sometimes snowflakes choose simple design. Sunlight at five and silhouettes emerge; and words and meanings work to converge. Wild flower and Wonders, we slip into sleuth. Autumn overshadows the losses of youth. Sunlight gives way to the Wonders of moon. Wild flower whispers leave me longing for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/10/2018 1:34:00 PM
Amazing imagery Rhoda, first time reading you will not be the last!!
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 4/11/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thank you very much, John, for your support and encouragement.
Date: 3/25/2018 9:19:00 AM
I love this poem! Very descriptive and well written. Great pic as well!!....80)
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/26/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, Pat. Appreciate you reading and commenting.
Date: 3/24/2018 10:03:00 AM
A delightful poem, Rhoda! You make use of sunlight's position and wild flowers to find a way to our heart. A feeling of longing lingers on, as the final line fades into the night. ~ Regards // paul
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/26/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. I appreciate your encouragement, support, and help with my writing.
Date: 3/20/2018 6:48:00 AM
This is so creative and your imagery is beautiful, Rhoda. Such a pleasure to read this morning. John
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/20/2018 6:32:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, John. Thank you for your support.
Date: 3/20/2018 6:33:00 AM
This is deep, so many great lines, a coming of age poem it reads to me... The last line is jus awesome..
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/20/2018 6:32:00 PM
Yes, SO...a coming of age poem. You nailed it...Thank you for your kindness.
Date: 3/20/2018 2:47:00 AM
Very beautiful rhyme Rhoda. Tom.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/20/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. You are a Dear.
Date: 3/19/2018 10:36:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Rhoda!! The imagery is superb.. Stellar creativity..
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/20/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robertina.
Date: 3/19/2018 10:05:00 PM
Wonderful imagery
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/20/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, Anastasia.
Date: 3/19/2018 9:39:00 PM
Lovely, Rhoda.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/20/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Line.
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