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Longing For the Love of My Life....

Have you left with no goodbye? I thought what we had was so right. Enter heartache and tears, As I sit here pondering tonight. We would have been so good together, That's not a lie. But before it was started, Seems you've said goodbye. So I say to you, my love I will stay true to you, As my tears flow, I hope you're not as blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/3/2010 5:33:00 PM
Wow excellent poem. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 8/1/2010 7:33:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup! I have enjoyed reading your works today and hope you will take the time to check out some of my works and let me know what you think...don't be too cruel though! :)
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Date: 8/1/2010 3:52:00 AM
deep write,, enjoyed...P.D.
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