Longing For Peace

What is this weight, upon my chest I feel?
Is it worries trapped inside my mind, or is it real

I gasp for air, but feel that there is nothing left for me
The weight I feel upon my chest I can not touch or see

It feels of heavy burden, painful loss and memories
As if I’m sitting in a boat alone in darkened seas

Surrounded by the darkness, and the air is thick and tight
I feel as if I’m standing still, though I row with all my might

I pray for God to clear the air, and show me that there’s light
But this prayer, has gone unheard, and my heart is full of fright

What do I do, where do I turn, there is no help for me
This is something I must endure, be brave until I’m free

The pain I feel, it just gets worse, and I feel I can not stand
What should I do, I try to move, but it’s as if I’m in quick sand

My mind has lost all reason; it’s as if there’s nothing there
My heart feels all the pressure, and it’s more than it can bear

I’m trapped inside a darkened space, that’s full of worry and despair
I’m weighed down with all my thoughts, and I don’t really want to share

I know that this is something that I will get through one day
But until then I’m trapped inside this mind so far away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 11/1/2009 3:53:00 AM
This brass-hat work of art is very expressful within its conveyance of emotion.You have a beautiful flowing heart.Sincerely,Eric
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Date: 10/26/2009 5:13:00 AM
Many, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on this October week >> James
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kirstie. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2009 6:45:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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