Longing For Autumn

"longing for autumn" cool air now breathes nestled within shades beauty surrounds longing for autumn she arrives in vintage flair whispering its me stunning skies of blue she moves with a scented breeze giving oxygen waste not a moment such wonder passes fast winter waits in line SkyWatcher 09-08-23
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September 9, 2023 at 6:42 PM
I’m a little sad summer is near its closing season of the year, but I am looking forward to her majestic fall. Great poem, Lisa :)
Ricci Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 2:53 AM
Hello Akkina. Good Morning. Thank you very much. Truly. I too am looking forward to fall. It has been a hot and humid summer for all. Thank you for your generous review and commentary. Have a wonderful day. Blessings (smile)
Bowring Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Love this dear Lisa! So awesome with wonderfully crafted lines. I too, can’t wait for Autumn. Roll on! That last stanza - wow! Glorious. Thank you so much for inspiring. Hugs to you. Xx
Ricci Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 3:03 AM
Good Morning Christina. Hello. It is I who thanks you. Truly. I'm honored. I can't wait for autumn to arrive. She's just about here. Thank you for pointing out the last stanza. I appreciate that very much. Have a wonderful day. Blessings (smile)
Baker Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 12:15 PM
I'm longing for autumn too, Lisa. I hope our autumns are just like your poem. I'm FAVing your poem as a backup just in case. :-) Your poem is very soothing as I read it. The stress goes away. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Ricci Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 3:15 AM
Good Morning Bill. Hi. Please know I do not take you for granted or any of your generosities. Truly. Thank you ever so much. Yes, I can't wait for autumn to arrive which is just around the corner now I hope. I am blessed where I don't have to travel to take her essence in. I see and witness all her flair where I sit. Have a wonderful and beautiful morning. Peace and Blessings always to you and Sara. (smiles...)
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