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Longing For Autumn

"longing for autumn"

cool air now breathes
nestled within shades
beauty surrounds

longing for autumn
she arrives in vintage flair
whispering its me

stunning skies of blue
she moves with a scented breeze
giving oxygen

waste not a moment
such wonder passes fast
winter waits in line

SkyWatcher
09-08-23 

Copyright © Lisa Ricci | Year Posted 2023

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Akkina Downing Date: 9/9/2023 6:42:00 PM I’m a little sad summer is near its closing season of the year, but I am looking forward to her majestic fall. Great poem, Lisa :) Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 9/10/2023 2:53:00 AM Hello Akkina. Good Morning. Thank you very much. Truly. I too am looking forward to fall. It has been a hot and humid summer for all. Thank you for your generous review and commentary. Have a wonderful day. Blessings (smile)

Christina Bowring Date: 9/9/2023 5:01:00 PM Love this dear Lisa! So awesome with wonderfully crafted lines. I too, can’t wait for Autumn. Roll on! That last stanza - wow! Glorious. Thank you so much for inspiring. Hugs to you. Xx Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 9/10/2023 3:03:00 AM Good Morning Christina. Hello. It is I who thanks you. Truly. I'm honored. I can't wait for autumn to arrive. She's just about here. Thank you for pointing out the last stanza. I appreciate that very much. Have a wonderful day. Blessings (smile)

Bill Baker Date: 9/9/2023 12:15:00 PM I'm longing for autumn too, Lisa. I hope our autumns are just like your poem. I'm FAVing your poem as a backup just in case. :-) Your poem is very soothing as I read it. The stress goes away. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 9/10/2023 3:15:00 AM Good Morning Bill. Hi. Please know I do not take you for granted or any of your generosities. Truly. Thank you ever so much. Yes, I can't wait for autumn to arrive which is just around the corner now I hope. I am blessed where I don't have to travel to take her essence in. I see and witness all her flair where I sit. Have a wonderful and beautiful morning. Peace and Blessings always to you and Sara. (smiles...)