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Longing For Autumn

"longing for autumn" cool air now breathes nestled within shades beauty surrounds longing for autumn she arrives in vintage flair whispering its me stunning skies of blue she moves with a scented breeze giving oxygen waste not a moment such wonder passes fast winter waits in line SkyWatcher 09-08-23

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/15/2023 2:16:00 PM

I, too, am ready for fall. You succinctly described it with your poetic words. I agree...waste not a moment of the beautiful fall season...for winter does indeed wait in line....and I'm not a winter fan. Beautifully done, have a great day Sara

Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/3/2023 5:49:00 AM

Good Morning Sara. Hi. I am so sorry for this late response especially for such a wonderful review to which I do not take for granted. Truly. Thank you. Thank you. May this day find you and Bill too well. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always to both of you. (smiles) I will see you on your page soon. Thank you Sara.

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/9/2023 6:42:00 PM

I’m a little sad summer is near its closing season of the year, but I am looking forward to her majestic fall. Great poem, Lisa :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 9/10/2023 2:53:00 AM

Hello Akkina. Good Morning. Thank you very much. Truly. I too am looking forward to fall. It has been a hot and humid summer for all. Thank you for your generous review and commentary. Have a wonderful day. Blessings (smile)

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/9/2023 5:01:00 PM

Love this dear Lisa! So awesome with wonderfully crafted lines. I too, can’t wait for Autumn. Roll on! That last stanza - wow! Glorious. Thank you so much for inspiring. Hugs to you. Xx

Lisa Ricci
Date: 9/10/2023 3:03:00 AM

Good Morning Christina. Hello. It is I who thanks you. Truly. I'm honored. I can't wait for autumn to arrive. She's just about here. Thank you for pointing out the last stanza. I appreciate that very much. Have a wonderful day. Blessings (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 9/9/2023 12:15:00 PM

I'm longing for autumn too, Lisa. I hope our autumns are just like your poem. I'm FAVing your poem as a backup just in case. :-) Your poem is very soothing as I read it. The stress goes away. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 9/10/2023 3:15:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Hi. Please know I do not take you for granted or any of your generosities. Truly. Thank you ever so much. Yes, I can't wait for autumn to arrive which is just around the corner now I hope. I am blessed where I don't have to travel to take her essence in. I see and witness all her flair where I sit. Have a wonderful and beautiful morning. Peace and Blessings always to you and Sara. (smiles...)