Longing

Request
Needful,hopeful
Asking,expecting,receiving
praise and worship Lord
Prayer.

Objective
Missionary,visionary
Longing, believing,acheiving
Sweet smile of actualisation
Goal.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2015 12:47:00 AM

Hi Kayod5, here I am again, enjoying all my old replies... :) I can't help it. Maybe I'm nosey ... PD

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/11/2015 3:53:00 PM

I'm here to congratulate you on your win with this poem, my dear! :) This is quite the write...The sweet smile of actualization makes the heart sing. :) Also...when we pray, we need to pray believing. Very great words. hugs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/6/2015 12:44:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on a well deserved first place win Kayod...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/6/2015 12:57:00 AM

Thank you my friend,have a nice day....huggs

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/4/2015 4:56:00 PM

Hi Kayod5, I am still catching up with reading all the fine winners' poems. Congratulations on your win for your brilliant poem! Sandra

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/6/2015 12:56:00 AM

God bless you Sandra,thanks for the message...huggs

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 1/3/2015 4:21:00 AM

Elegant theme, Congs on the poem Bryan

Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 1/7/2015 6:04:00 AM

So very much i flag your thanks Huggs

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/6/2015 12:55:00 AM

Thank you Bryan...huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:14:00 PM

Kayod5, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/6/2015 12:54:00 AM

Thank you very much for this message Linda...huggs

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/2/2015 4:31:00 PM

A big congrats. You said quite a lot in a short time. BG

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/2/2015 8:05:00 PM

Thank you Barbara,nice to have you here; have a fun-fill Weekend...huggs

Kika Ayala

Date: 1/2/2015 3:39:00 PM

Kayode, this is an excellent cinquain that so beautifully shows what longing is all about! Congratulations on a well-deserved wonderful win! Best wishes. Kika.

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/2/2015 8:07:00 PM

Immense thanks Kika,nice to have you here; have a lovely Weekend...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 1:57:00 PM

A very nice take on this theme. congrats in the contest, Kayode.

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/2/2015 2:02:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 11:24:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/2/2015 11:30:00 AM

Thank you for the message,have a joyful Weekend Jan...huggs

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 7:53:00 AM

Hi Kayode! I had no doubt that I would be returning to congratulate you...and sure enough here I find you on the top podium!! Glad to be sharing this honour with you:) Well done! // paul

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/2/2015 10:26:00 AM

Thank you Paul,it is my pleasure too; congrats big Daddy...huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 9:25:00 PM

Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Kayod5

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/1/2015 11:44:00 PM

Thank very much Dr. It is my pleasure participating in a contest under a don that you are. Thank you for all the efforts and my Placement;you have done me great honour may the Lord of Hosts reward you in folds...huggs

Ralph Sergi

Date: 12/31/2014 3:00:00 PM

Hi Kayod5: greatly penned and worthy of a win. Thanks for your comment on my poem

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 12/31/2014 5:27:00 PM

Happy new year Ralph, may the new year bring love and peace...huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2014 11:20:00 AM

Great to reach our goal or goals..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Doris has made it through the surgery and is on her way home..Sara

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 12/31/2014 5:30:00 PM

What a good News! I am happy for her; happy new to you all , may this year bring in more peace and joy....huggs

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2014 5:39:00 AM

Enjoyed your spiritual take on this topic, Kayode. Our goals can be reached through prayer. gl in contest, and have a lovely weekend. /x/ paul

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 12/27/2014 5:43:00 AM

Thank you Paul and compliment of the season...huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/27/2014 1:15:00 AM

I love your take on the theme. A longing to please God, a life fulfilled...all wonderful goals...hugs, Rhonda

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 12/27/2014 1:42:00 AM

Thanks Jan...huggs