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Longanimity

How many sands have you counted building castles near the shoreline, which the sea washes away before the day is done? Alas, you build them again and again unmindful of the raging waves and the wild winds blasting away those paradigms~ before your hands could shape the towers in your mind; As if there were no waves~ As if there were no winds. Every castle you built scattered in the shifting sands, yet your dreams perpetuated ~ like the course of the river resolutely pushing though drought hinders its way to reach the sea; Like the flight of the eagle endlessly flying amidst the chancy sky.

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Date: 4/9/2022 12:33:00 AM
"As if there were no waves~ As if there were no winds." - "but your dreams lived on" - your words are regular words, but as their wordsmith, you seem to put them together in a super regular way.
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Date: 3/30/2022 12:56:00 AM
"like a river resolutely pushing its way to reach the sea", "Like an eagle continuing its flight", "Like a soul persistently praying~" - Beautiful comparisons. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/27/2022 8:26:00 PM
Hi Jez, back to your beautiful poem once more with congratulations on your great win in the contest !
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Date: 3/27/2022 10:56:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, JCB:-) I enjoyed it!
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Date: 3/25/2022 8:48:00 PM
Beautiful message on perseverance even when your work is washed away, you can still create, very uplifting!
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Date: 3/25/2022 6:56:00 PM
Though our dream castles may be washed away by torrential waves and violent winds, we never stop dreaming ! Our dreams keep soaring into the sky, like an eagle on flight ! Beautiful poem Jez !
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