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Longanimity

How many sands have you counted building castles near the shoreline, which the sea washes away before the day is done? Alas, you build them again and again unmindful of the raging waves and the mocking wild winds blasting away those precious paradigms~ before your hands could shape the towers in your mind; As if there were no waves~ As if there were no winds. Every castle you built scattered with the shifting sands; But your dreams perpetuated ~ like a river resolutely pushing its course to reach the sea; Like an eagle continuing its flight amidst the chanciness of the horizon; Like a soul persistently praying~ believing sans seeing, heeding sans whining. 24 March 2022 Pick-A-Title, Vol 29 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 4th place A Brian Strand 1098 Poetry Contest 1st Place

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Date: 4/9/2022 12:33:00 AM
"As if there were no waves~ As if there were no winds." - "but your dreams lived on" - your words are regular words, but as their wordsmith, you seem to put them together in a super regular way.
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Date: 3/30/2022 12:56:00 AM
"like a river resolutely pushing its way to reach the sea", "Like an eagle continuing its flight", "Like a soul persistently praying~" - Beautiful comparisons. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/27/2022 8:26:00 PM
Hi Jez, back to your beautiful poem once more with congratulations on your great win in the contest !
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Date: 3/27/2022 10:56:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, JCB:-) I enjoyed it!
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Date: 3/25/2022 8:48:00 PM
Beautiful message on perseverance even when your work is washed away, you can still create, very uplifting!
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Date: 3/25/2022 6:56:00 PM
Though our dream castles may be washed away by torrential waves and violent winds, we never stop dreaming ! Our dreams keep soaring into the sky, like an eagle on flight ! Beautiful poem Jez !
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