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The night was long, the rain was cold She shivered between sheets of gold Her whip-poor-will was silent too The nightly joy, sliced clearly through 'Cause, nature did the bird protect Sleep in your chair, feel the affect Contest: Form L-Lay Sponsor: Constance La France Theme: Romance (lack of it) Date:April 2, 2022 Checking: SyllableCounter.Net The night was long, the rain was cold 8 2She shivered between, the sheets of gold 9 corrected 3Her whip-poor-will was silent too 8 4The nightly joy, sliced clearly through 8 5'Cause, nature did the bird protect 8 6Sleep in your chair, feel the affect 8 Amazing how after 60 years of sharing a bed the emotional affect of one's mate sleeping elsewhere. He fell and hurt his back and says that laying flat hurts(makes muscles go into spasms). I am meaning the emotional affect of him sleeping elsewhere. I have about got used to it now.

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Date: 4/27/2022 11:47:00 PM
Congratulations on the best new poems list. Well done.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/28/2022 4:11:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanette, for letting me know. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 4/27/2022 12:44:00 AM
Oh Sara, I hope your husband is feeling better. I hurt myself about six years ago and bruised my sternum, and it about killed me to lay down flat. I had to sleep sitting up on the couch in the living room, it was awful. I was so happy to be back by my hubby's side after a few weeks of that. I can say I feel your pain, but I feel that it is your husband's pain I really can relate to. Hope he's soon by your side. Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 4/27/2022 5:28:00 AM
Why thank you, BJ for the visit with congrats. I appreciate the nice review. My husband is still sleeping in the chair, and it has been maybe 14 weeks. He has been to a doctor and has not heard from them. He has been to his family doctor who gave him pills for muscle spasms which he has not taken. He is out there working in that garden or on tractors or lawnmowers all day so at 81 I think he is doing too much. Sara
Date: 4/17/2022 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on having this cute poem at the top of the best new poems list Sara. I wish you a very Happy Easter! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/18/2022 12:53:00 PM
Connie, Thanks for letting me know that it was there at one time. Easter was nice. The rain let up long enough for the children to do the Easter Egg Hunt. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 4/17/2022 3:04:00 PM
Sara, cute verse. Congratulations on the first place on poem of the month. Married 38 years before he passed, and I stop sleeping with him after 6 years of marriage. My husband snored so loud it use to hurt my ear drums. He understood. The guys complained and laughed about it when they went hunting. Hope you have a Happy Easter.
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Date: 4/18/2022 4:23:00 AM
Eve, My husband's sister always complained about her husband snoring. He finally got the CPAP and I think that helped him. They both died in the last year so his snoring is healed. They say it is horrible for the people in the house of those that snore. Thank you for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 4/15/2022 9:59:00 AM
Many congratulations Sara for being top new poem - very well deserved indeed. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 4/15/2022 2:17:00 PM
Ann, Thanks for letting me know it was top new poem. Sara
Date: 4/15/2022 8:33:00 AM
Top of the charts! Great write, Sara, congrats
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 2:13:00 PM
US, Thanks for the kind review. Sara
Date: 4/14/2022 12:52:00 PM
No wonder it won! - Marshall
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Date: 4/15/2022 2:13:00 PM
Thanks..Sara
Date: 4/14/2022 12:51:00 PM
Nice rhythm and rhyme! - Marshall
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 2:08:00 PM
Why thank you, Marshall. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 4/10/2022 1:13:00 PM
Sara, congratulation for being top on the list and your win in the contest. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 4/10/2022 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Debra for stopping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 4/10/2022 10:25:00 AM
I missed this gem Sara, congrats on your win and also being number one. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 4/10/2022 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. We are okay. I have been better but I was much younger. Your visit is encouraging. Sara
Date: 4/10/2022 5:27:00 AM
Dear Sara, Congratulations on this poem being on top of the list. Your poem expresses the emotional effect with so much tenderness - Hope your husband is feeling better! Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/10/2022 8:24:00 AM
Malabika, I think he is feeling better. He has a doctor's appointment soon to see if he fractured his vertebrae. I don't think he did, but we will see. I think he just irritated the area where he had already had surgery a long time ago and muscles went in spasm to protect the area. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 4/8/2022 1:38:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2022 2:41:00 PM
Constance, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. I appreciate the honor of being on the winners' list and I learned a little by participating. Sara
Date: 4/6/2022 12:49:00 PM
Back with my Congrats, Sara. responding to your note below, I try to sleep on my back just because it's the best way to keep your face from getting wrinkles. I think i would be very comfortable in a great recliner!
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Date: 4/7/2022 4:19:00 AM
Andrea, I thought my frown lines were caused by the pain I experience in my life every day. LOL..I appreciate the second visit. Sara
Date: 4/6/2022 8:58:00 AM
Hi Sara, One day he will miss cuddling up beside you, comfort is good but love and warmth lies in the bed you share, excellent write my friend and many congrats. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/7/2022 4:14:00 AM
Jennifer, Thanks for the encouraging words. We are in the winter of our lives so probably he will be just as happy in his chair from now on. He doesn't seem to be getting better and won't go to the doctor. Sara
Date: 4/5/2022 6:33:00 AM
I knew this fabulous poem would be on the list. Congratulations, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/7/2022 4:11:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the confidence. Sara
Date: 4/4/2022 7:01:00 AM
Perfect writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/4/2022 7:25:00 AM
Alex, Thanks for stopping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 4/3/2022 4:38:00 AM
This reminds me of my grandparents when they're that age my dear friend Sara. A well-crafted poem my dear friend. I love its form and its perfect flow of rhyme. Thank you very much for sharing. God bless. Hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/3/2022 4:48:00 AM
Thank you, Len. Well, we are the grandparents and step-great-grandparents as well. Life keeps on flowing and we keep on aging. Sara
Date: 4/3/2022 3:41:00 AM
My hubby just got back home from hospital after a bad fall. He's so glad to be back in his own bed. Well done Sara. God Bless, JB
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/3/2022 4:21:00 AM
Judy, I hope that your husband is healing nicely. Yes, isn't it nice to get back in our own bed where we can rest better. Some people are very different as my husband. Your visit is uplifting. Sara
Date: 4/2/2022 6:29:00 PM
I know people who sleep in different rooms now. I would not mind it personally since joe wakes me up 5 am to go to work and it is not easy for an insomniac to get back to sleep at 5 knowing I have to wake up for work in 2 hours. I do love my weekends
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Date: 4/3/2022 4:09:00 AM
Andrea, This is not the first time he has taken to his chair and he seems to sleep very well in the chair so if he rests and is happy that is fine with me. Every time he has had surgery he hits the chair and that has been about 9 times now. I can't sleep very well in the chair because I am not a back sleeper, but I do take a nap in the chair occasionally because I reach a point that I need sleep. I don't sleep very well at night and it finally catches up with me. I used to get up at 4 A.M. to get him out the door for work then I would try to get a little nap before I had to get up to get to care for children. Life isn't always easy. Sara
Date: 4/2/2022 11:36:00 AM
Sara, excellent rhyme and message. I think we all suffer from some kind of injury in our lifetime that may lead to sleeping apart. I certainly feel your pain. (FAV)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/2/2022 12:07:00 PM
Debra, Those injuries as we get older, seem to take longer to heal and sometimes we are never the same. I am honored that you would fav this one. Your visit was inspiring. Sara
Date: 4/2/2022 9:49:00 AM
A great emotive and imaginal write! A fave for me. Every line strikes me: sheets of gold, whip-poor-will, long night, cold rain…
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/2/2022 12:03:00 PM
Kim, Your comment lifted my spirits. Thank you for dropping by. I am honored that you would fav it. Sara

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