Long Live Love

A toss of the head
A flick of her hair
The wave of her hand
As her beauty did flare
 
Her bountiful step
The spring in her stride
Her laugh as we waked 
Hand in hand through the tide
 
Her mouth with its smile
As we wrote in the sand
Her cries of frustration
As sea coated the land
 
Those little I love yous
Meant so much back then
That on annual vacations
We repeat them again
 
For least we forget 
In the daily ado
Our marital vows
Mean forever I do
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 2:04 PM
this is a really sweet and lovely poem of everlasting love. when did you first post it? I am the first to comment and I am sure it must have been here a long time. I hope others will read it and comment!
Docherty Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 3:15 AM
Thankyou for your kindness Andrea. Yes, this as been posted some time, and a reason I don't pst so many here any more as it sadly went so quiet after all the net issues the site has had previously. If things pick up I'll be around more as I appreciate sharing and learning further... Hope all is well with you - good to hear!
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