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Long Lasting Visible Smoothness- Wbm

A girl from Tennessee admits, her friend and her are on the fritz- One blonde, one brunette, their names? I forget! I saw them walk with hairy pits! Long hair of waves down to their knees, loves Mary Jane and tokes with ease- Is this all the rave? Forgetting to shave… "USE NAIR UNDER THERE PRETTY PLEASE!" Syllable count: 8-8-5-5-8 (x2) howmanysyllables.com What's Bugging Me Contest July 31, 2019 Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

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Banjo Casto

Date: 8/1/2019 9:05:00 PM

Really brings the house down, lol!

Lu Loo
Date: 8/4/2019 11:47:00 AM

thank you! :)-luloo

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/31/2019 11:34:00 PM

What a limerick is suppose to be...funny. lol this is a great one too.

Lu Loo
Date: 8/4/2019 11:47:00 AM

thank you, that made my day because it's so hard for me to try to be funny in limericks. I have a more serious side to my writing, then can be very sarcastic with my words. lol I tried! thank you! :)-luloo