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A girl from Tennessee admits,
her friend and her are on the fritz-
          One blonde, one brunette,
          their names? I forget!
I saw them walk with hairy pits!

Long hair of waves down to their knees,
loves Mary Jane and tokes with ease-
          Is this all the rave?
          Forgetting to shave…
"USE NAIR UNDER THERE PRETTY PLEASE!"


Syllable count: 8-8-5-5-8 (x2)
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Date: 8/1/2019 9:05:00 PM
Really brings the house down, lol!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/4/2019 11:47:00 AM
thank you! :)-luloo
Date: 7/31/2019 11:34:00 PM
What a limerick is suppose to be...funny. lol this is a great one too.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/4/2019 11:47:00 AM
thank you, that made my day because it's so hard for me to try to be funny in limericks. I have a more serious side to my writing, then can be very sarcastic with my words. lol I tried! thank you! :)-luloo