Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Long Flowing Hair

Definitely something about long flowing hair
That turns my old crank, no surprise
With a face that could even sink a battleship
Still her hair makes my temperature rise

Can imagine nuzzling my dirty big honker
In those long strands of silken flow
Takes me far away on some exotic desert island
Where hula dancers are putting on a show

Wake up each night with my arms outstretched
My fingers combing the air softly
Wishing upon wish it was not just a dream
It's an image that literally rocks me

Some people think it has sexual overtones
Yet still others call it a fetish
But just by writing these words down I find
For stirring my libido it's quite effective

Definitely something about long flowing hair...

© Jack Ellison 2013

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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs November 3, 2013 at 9:48 AM Keep em coming Jack Jack Ellison November 3, 2013 at 10:12 AM I'll keep 'em coming if you keep reading 'em! Woo hoo! xoxoxox

Eileen Manassian November 2, 2013 at 3:39 PM Kenny...where did the inspiration come for this?????Absolutely sizzling....Caught me by surprise.... ;-) Long thick hair is beautiful....hugs Jack Ellison November 2, 2013 at 4:00 PM You got it... sizzling!!! LOL Hair has always been a big asset for me! Don't know where the inspiration came from... hugs xoxoxox

Mark Peterson November 2, 2013 at 11:44 AM Jack, this really strikes a chord. A few men speak of it. All men think of it. I sneak a peak whenever I get the chance. I tried a tail-rhyme, by the way. Mark Jack Ellison November 2, 2013 at 11:58 AM I will check it out Mark! I like your comments LOL Much appreciated... never too old eh! :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper November 2, 2013 at 10:57 AM I second that Jack! Long flowing hair is great, and so is your take on it in this poem -Bravo!!! MC Jack Ellison November 2, 2013 at 11:01 AM I'm 78 years old... I should be sitting on an old rocking chair watching little birdies at play! Instead I'm watching big birdies with long flowing hair! LOL NEVER too old! See what's ahead for you....

Carol Eastman November 2, 2013 at 9:07 AM Wait a minute... Don't tell me Cathie is bald!... NAW!... I know better... When you wake up you're combing the wrong person's hair... Should be Cathies'... LOL... Silly Boy!... You tell him Cathie!... Dragon has a little top notch of hair on the top of his head... Quite fetching... All baby dragons have them... I usually put a bow in it... less threatening look... until he opens his mouth and the flames come out... LOL Jack Ellison November 2, 2013 at 9:37 AM Do you have long flowing hair or any of your wee friends... Dragon perhaps! LOL xoxoxoxox