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Long Before a Passing Storm

When the eyes on the sun blink The world gets warm Till night-time when the eyes of the moon wink When the eyes on the sun blink Rain showers come for "Life" to drink Flowers in the meadows form When the eyes on the sun blink Long before a passing storm

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 7:38:00 AM

Oh nice Charlie! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/29/2023 12:25:00 PM

Dear Charlie, I adore the expressive personification of your beautiful poem. Nature dances within the rhythm of your verse with soulful ease. A splendid piece, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/26/2023 11:57:00 PM

Sweet! Lovely write. Nature is always such a source of inspiration. Thanks for your visit to my page. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2023 3:51:00 PM

love the clever personification here too charlie, a delightful poem:-) hugs jan xx

Deb M

Date: 7/26/2023 6:02:00 AM

Aww love this Charlie….so sweet! Debx

Tom Woody

Date: 7/26/2023 5:24:00 AM

Nice. Sadly, the moon isn't bringing much in the way of cooling relief for some these days. I'm thinking Phoenix, Texas, even Sicily etal

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/26/2023 4:16:00 AM

Charlie, your Triolet conjures such beautiful and clear imagery, especially I like "for life to drink" Good Luck!!!