Charles Messina Poet Triolet

Long Before a Passing Storm

When the eyes on the sun blink 
The world gets warm 
Till night-time when the eyes of the moon wink 
When the eyes on the sun blink 
Rain showers come for "Life" to drink 
Flowers in the meadows form 
When the eyes on the sun blink 
Long before a passing storm

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Linda Alice Fowler September 5, 2023 at 7:38 AM Oh nice Charlie! :)

Susan Ashley July 29, 2023 at 12:25 PM Dear Charlie, I adore the expressive personification of your beautiful poem. Nature dances within the rhythm of your verse with soulful ease. A splendid piece, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eileen Manassian July 26, 2023 at 11:57 PM Sweet! Lovely write. Nature is always such a source of inspiration. Thanks for your visit to my page. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison July 26, 2023 at 3:51 PM love the clever personification here too charlie, a delightful poem:-) hugs jan xx

Deb M July 26, 2023 at 6:02 AM Aww love this Charlie….so sweet! Debx

Mike Gentile July 26, 2023 at 4:16 AM Charlie, your Triolet conjures such beautiful and clear imagery, especially I like "for life to drink" Good Luck!!!