Lonesome Sound

LONESOME
SOUND 
			
Old man said he could hear that whistle blow a hundred miles 
and they could write a song about that. 
Said he could tell how many cars a train freighted 
just by how sad was its wail.

Old man said, trains usually sounded out at crossings or towns 
or coming upon another train. Said 
No. 149 out of St. Louis left
the towns a hundred miles back. 
Had no call to think about 
meeting another train'til Lander. 
Or maybe Crawford.

Old man said, keening cross the plains like that
only thing took it to heart was 
coyotes and jack rabbits. Mayhap 
a snake or two, sunning hisself on the rails. 

Said, last run she made, leaned on her whistle
from the Missouri straight through to the Rockies.
Never let up, just hollered cross the land 
like the world come undone. 
Like something lost 
couldn't never be right again.

I said how that train was probly thinking 
of the long empty plains ahead. 
Of fenceposts ticking by 
and cattle scabbing up the buffalo grass. 

Thinking of passing unseen and unheard 
the grassed-over soddies hunched at springs 
once piped now trickling through old stock ponds.
Of empty match-box homesteads
timber-bleached and bowed before the 
vast order of sun and sky. 

Of tilted windmills wheeling, listless
as a fly wing-plucked and turning, turning 
round on bleary heat-cracked panes 
what look myopic upon the  prairie
the grass, the sky, the land to come.

Old man looked at the middle distance. Said
don't know but she wailed for the thought 
of her last pull through the pass at Lander stockyards.
Or for what she maybe wouldn't find 
coming out t'other side.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/10/2015 11:49:00 PM
Congratulations, CHERYL....SKAT
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:55:00 AM
Sad and lonely story. Beautiful voice, Cheryl.
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:19:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Cheryl! Great work!
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Date: 8/9/2015 8:40:00 AM
Cheryl, this is a wonderfully told story about the demise of the railroads and a tribute to the memory of those who built them and rode the rails before the "bar car" was added.
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