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Lonely Train

Love stays strange as the seasons change. I ride that lonely train when the sun goes down. I smoke a cigarette and think about the past. These days are my future, which one will be my last. Yesterday's gone, I heard it in a song. I drink from the bottle when the pain comes along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/18/2012 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Tyler. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 1:42:00 PM
This poetry deserves all the recognition which you are recieving...congratulations dear poet ! Much love, james
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Date: 11/10/2010 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Tyler. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Tyler. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2010 6:49:00 AM
Can feel the despair
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:27:00 PM
not very good habits, but a well written poem,keep it up!!!and welcome to poetry soup!----Ell
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:14:00 AM
I hear you, brother. That train just keeps rolling, and it doesn't have any good stops along its route. Excellent work.
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