Lonely the Interludes

fingers like tendrils stiffen from refrains, despair on moonless halls… blistered Dr. Ram Mehta's Cinquain Contest by nette onclaud
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January 6, 2015 at 12:15 AM
I would have placed yours much higher, Nette...you created a feeling of longing without writing the word...beautiful! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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January 2, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Nette,, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Nette, very beautiful with so many emotional metaphors. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:07 PM
best one I have seen!! Congrats, Nette.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Wow Nette! This is poetically beautiful. a 7 rating for you. Congrats on your win and all the best for this new year. // paul
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:13 AM
Congrats on the win nette,this speaks volume...huggs
Mehta Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, nette
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December 21, 2014 at 7:17 AM
beautiful Nette.. :) kahusay husay.. ! am still here.. where we go? hugs.. :)!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:15 AM
beautiful Nette.. :) kahusay husay.. ! am still here.. where we go? hugs.. :)!
Maverick Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Very emotive Nette, well put together..'
Dunn Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:55 PM
Nette, Music set the poetic verse, just love it lady, it is so full of harmony and emotions great work here my friend, Happy Holidays to you my friend I hope all your dreams come true this magical season, cheri
Smith Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 5:31 PM
I can hear the melody playing nette...beautiful ...huggs
Macmillan Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Deep and moody piece, hon. My favourite image is the chasing ripples... such a good effect of the how it was all there, perhaps already in motion and it was only the fingers job to pursue the melody... I really like that. We're all quite sick, here, but it seems to just be seasonal... awful coughs but not this scary bug that has hospitalized thousands. I have our girl on a hot air mister, steamy bathroom, vapour rubs and plenty of TLC. Gotta go. xoxox
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:33 PM
this flows like a marvellous melody Nette:-) Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:01 PM
this is stunning, Nette. You followed not just the syllable count but the preferred way of doing number of words per line too (I think). I love this.
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..It is sad to play until someone gets blisters..I enjoyed reading this one today..Looks like a Christmas tree..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Parker Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 1:27 PM
I love how I can get lost in the harmony of your poetry..so delicate so refined
Gonza Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 12:50 PM
I like the tone of your brilliant poem; sad and filled with want. Outstanding melody, Nette
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December 17, 2014 at 12:47 PM
- Deep and powerful, well done Nette - Luck in contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meade Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 11:49 AM
I hear a voice from my past -- practice makes perfect!! Loved the notes played this morning.
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