Lonely Soul

Tears running down my precious face. 
I'm slowly melting as my heart erases.
My heart has been stabbed several times.
I'm down on my knees trying to unwind.
I feel guilt in my soul that I can't control.
You left me shredded apart and not whole.
Why torture my heart and my soul?
Why leave me in the dark and so cold?
This pain I'm feeling I've never felt before.
My heart is ripped as I lie on the floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Mostafa Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Fantastic
Marable Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:46 AM
Hurt and pain Makes ink rain Write On Andrea!
Scragg Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 6:34 AM
A very powerful, impactful write. Pure emotion and despair. The use of contrast in the line "you left me shredded apart and not whole" strikes home the disappointed felt. Someone was expected to make the person whole but they had the opposite effect on them. A very real and raw poem. Brilliant write!
Frierson Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 6:51 AM
Thanks appreciat it a lot
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