Lonely Mortality

Like fragranced flowers soon will lose their smell
and colors fade from red to light pastel,
my body, now, will rot awaiting hell
as those I love have proffered to foretell.

Yet love is but a moments fleeting gift.
In passion’s heat it purges heart and soul
and in the end it leaves our mind adrift
too weak in lust to understand the toll.

So let the flames consume the mortal me,
no mourners at my grave to cry or grieve,
nor loss to life, my end could ever be,
with final breath, I’ll rise and quiet leave.

When gone, you see, is your antipathy,
pray not for me I need no sympathy.


10/21/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Congrats on your win, James.
Inman Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 1:47 AM
Thank you Line.
George   Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Great take on this subject matter, James. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Sincerely, Elaine
Inman Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 7:44 PM
Thank you Elaine.
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November 14, 2017 at 9:04 AM
It's an good write James. Congratulations on your win.
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 11:01 AM
Thank you again Janis.
Lawless Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:15 PM
love it James!!! the last couplet a headstone for this grave setting.
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 1:33 AM
Thanks John, interesting thought for a headstone. Seems pretty harsh and in your face toward whomever this person might be, though. A lot of anger in those last two lines.
Carmack Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 1:13 PM
The second stanza is my favorite. Congrats on your win.
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 1:33 AM
Thanks Rob.
Canerdy Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Really well-written sonnet--CONGRATS on your win, James! Janice
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 1:34 AM
Thank you for the kind words Janice.
Breidenthal Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 3:50 PM
This reminds me of a Shakespeare sonnet I read recently. It starts with, "no longer mourn for me, when I am dead." It's a good one! I quite like this one. Always, Laura
Inman Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 12:23 AM
I looked it up and I believe I read that poem in High School, many years ago. I can see the similarities. Thanks for pointing that out to me Laura, and for your nice words.
One Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:49 AM
This is very sad...I hope it is for the death contest and fictional...
Inman Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 6:41 AM
Yes Silent One, it is for the contest. Thank you for your visit.
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 5:48 PM
a wrenching poem so well delivered and deeply felt, james... you surely touched me...huggs
Inman Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Thank you for your kind visit Nette, life can be cruel sometimes.
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