Lonely Mortality

Like fragranced flowers soon will lose their smell
and colors fade from red to light pastel,
my body, now, will rot awaiting hell
as those I love have proffered to foretell.

Yet love is but a moments fleeting gift.
In passion’s heat it purges heart and soul
and in the end it leaves our mind adrift
too weak in lust to understand the toll.

So let the flames consume the mortal me,
no mourners at my grave to cry or grieve,
nor loss to life, my end could ever be,
with final breath, I’ll rise and quiet leave.

When gone, you see, is your antipathy,
pray not for me I need no sympathy.


10/21/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/18/2017 8:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win, James.
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James Inman
Date: 11/19/2017 1:47:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 11/16/2017 2:00:00 PM
Great take on this subject matter, James. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Sincerely, Elaine
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James Inman
Date: 11/16/2017 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Elaine.
Date: 11/14/2017 9:04:00 AM
It's an good write James. Congratulations on your win.
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James Inman
Date: 11/14/2017 11:01:00 AM
Thank you again Janis.
Date: 11/13/2017 6:15:00 PM
love it James!!! the last couplet a headstone for this grave setting.
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James Inman
Date: 11/14/2017 1:33:00 AM
Thanks John, interesting thought for a headstone. Seems pretty harsh and in your face toward whomever this person might be, though. A lot of anger in those last two lines.
Date: 11/13/2017 1:13:00 PM
The second stanza is my favorite. Congrats on your win.
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James Inman
Date: 11/14/2017 1:33:00 AM
Thanks Rob.
Date: 11/13/2017 12:04:00 PM
Really well-written sonnet--CONGRATS on your win, James! Janice
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James Inman
Date: 11/14/2017 1:34:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words Janice.
Date: 10/28/2017 3:50:00 PM
This reminds me of a Shakespeare sonnet I read recently. It starts with, "no longer mourn for me, when I am dead." It's a good one! I quite like this one. Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 10/29/2017 12:23:00 AM
I looked it up and I believe I read that poem in High School, many years ago. I can see the similarities. Thanks for pointing that out to me Laura, and for your nice words.
Date: 10/22/2017 2:49:00 AM
This is very sad...I hope it is for the death contest and fictional...
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James Inman
Date: 10/22/2017 6:41:00 AM
Yes Silent One, it is for the contest. Thank you for your visit.
Date: 10/21/2017 5:48:00 PM
a wrenching poem so well delivered and deeply felt, james... you surely touched me...huggs
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James Inman
Date: 10/21/2017 8:08:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit Nette, life can be cruel sometimes.
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