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Lonely Man

The figure sat in silent woe
A lonely soul in empty park
He watched the people come and go
The daylight passed and sky drew dark.

He longed to be amongst the crowd
To see his friends up on the street
To walk with head erect and proud
Instead of slouched upon this seat

But all his friends are long since dead
His money gone his pride as well
His thoughts are of the life he's led
Huddled in his private hell

A ragged coat upon his back
His hair of grey now long and thin
His shirt is just a piece of sack
Held together with a pin

He shivered on his lonely seat
Dead autumn leaves brushed at his face 
He groaned and struggled to his feet
It's time he left this lonely place

Lighted windows passed he by
Bright fires and laughter warmth and rest
He stopped to look and gave a sigh
And pulled his coat about his chest

His home a basement dark and old
With crumbling walls and broken panes
Everything is damp and cold
With seeping water from the drains.

How lonely can a person be
Alone in rooms so bare
We do not look
We do not see 
How many of us care !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/1/2017 5:42:00 AM
Thankyou for all your kind words,poetry comes to me sometimes when I am lying in bed, and I get up and jot it down ,or I see something on the tv etc . Carole.
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Date: 6/30/2017 1:11:00 PM
I have read both your poems Carol, and enjoyed both of them. You have a strong visual style and good word flow. I hope we see more of your work. // Barry
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Date: 6/29/2017 5:14:00 PM
I was so pulled into reading this and feeling such care for this person and the emotions that come with this well written piece. :)
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Date: 6/29/2017 5:10:00 PM
Wow Carole, this was incredibly good, the flow, the rhyming and the theme. It all blended together so nicely that made this poem so easy to read and so hard to stop reading once you started. I really like your style, both poems I have read from you today have their own melody. Welcome to soup. I have a feeling you will do very well here.
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Carole Gleed
Date: 7/1/2017 5:48:00 AM
Thankyou for those kind words the themes come to me from day to day life through observation.i have written a few down in a book which I might post at times.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things