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Lonely Horizon

~
the setting sun
caressed a lonely horizon
like a good night kiss
that couldn't wait 
for morning to return
~

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/26/2019 8:58:00 AM

yeoww!...smashin' expectation of a kiss!...you rocked the roof, chris!... huggs

Chris Green
Date: 8/26/2019 9:23:00 AM

Thanks so very much Nette

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/26/2019 2:18:00 AM

Beautifully loaded and unfolded in just a tiny stanza. So good to be reading you again as you never fail to awe me and excite my muse. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 8/26/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank you so very much CayCay. I am happy you enjoyed this one

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2019 12:38:00 PM

... so beautiful and sweet, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 8/26/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/24/2019 10:41:00 AM

I see it setting. A soft, peaceful poem with the gift of anticipation for the sun to rise again. Well written :)

Chris Green
Date: 8/26/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I am happy you liked this one.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/24/2019 4:00:00 AM

Wow relatable and the imagery is so poetic in brevity too. You describe superbly. Kudos! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.

Chris Green
Date: 8/26/2019 8:06:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/24/2019 2:56:00 AM

There is a tinge of sadness when watching the sun dip below the horizon and disappear. I felt that in your words. Lovely my friend. xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 8/26/2019 8:06:00 AM

Thank you once again Connie for your wonderful comment on my poem.

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/23/2019 8:22:00 PM

a blush of crimson faded beneath the lambent rise of moon as it cradled stars like thoughts....lol, just messing with a different response then the usual your poem is beautifully written, which by the way it is, as always....a great write! perfectly penned... :)

Chris Green
Date: 8/26/2019 8:05:00 AM

I loved it, thank you for your beautiful addition. : ) I appreciate your kindness Sandra. I am thrilled you liked this.