Lonely Crow

Lonely Crow… 


Where is the place to find it all? The crow is cawing far, far.
Where should I go to hear the call? The crow is cawing far, far.
We’re in prison all our lives, half in bandage and half in strifes.
We need a place without the wall; the crow is cawing far, far.
Listen to him when he speaks; where is the sign that we all seek,
The big or small and short or tall, the crow is cawing far, far.
You go to the garden and ask around, you will hear his name, profound;
he reaches to all big and small; the crow is cawing far, far.
I tried to hide and be unseen, live my life as a teen, fourteen.
Where should I go, not bend or crawl? The crow is cawing far, far.
My body is my cage and stage; boiling I am, filled with rage.
I don't want to be slave and thrall; the crow is cawing far, far.
I asked the crow what was divine. Where can I go to drink his wine?
Learning to read his holy scrawl, the crow is cawing far, far.
Let “Haloo” break his cage and fly, fly into the clouds and die,
escape from this orbiting ball; the crow is cawing far, far.

7/30/16  Haloo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/27/2018 7:43:00 AM
Once we make it to that special place where restrictions count no more, we will find all the answers that we need, Pashang! ~ Regards // paul
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/28/2018 1:12:00 AM
I hope we do... Thanks, Paul...
Date: 7/18/2018 10:26:00 PM
Yes, quite hypnotic, well done, Pashang...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/19/2018 2:30:00 PM
Thanks James...
Date: 9/24/2016 10:10:00 AM
The Ghazal is such a musical poetic form. I will have to try this, one day. I like this your Lonely Crow, Pashang. :-)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/24/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thanks Tom....Yes I love Ghazal..
Date: 9/3/2016 6:31:00 PM
I am reminded somewhat of Edgar's Raven, and the looming death on the horizon ... despite our brief glimpses into the truth, there remains that crow, still cawing, cawing. My favorite section of this ghazal was your last four lines, where you allude to life and freedom arising out of death. Eerie poem, but with a lot of truth embedded.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/8/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Tim, you're good friend
Date: 8/24/2016 10:00:00 PM
I like it, also a fan of crows. DC
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/25/2016 1:23:00 PM
Me too...Thank you..
Date: 8/19/2016 2:35:00 PM
Spiritual poem and very good. We are all on a journey and to see what is real is not always easy. Your work is very pleasant to read.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/19/2016 5:40:00 PM
Thank you Duke....
Date: 8/18/2016 3:55:00 PM
Good one..Thanks for stopping by my work Georgia..I have put in a second one on the same poem if you care to read it..Sara
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Date: 8/19/2016 5:39:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I' ll...
Date: 8/18/2016 1:13:00 PM
enjoyed this form of poetry, not an easy task I would think. Congratulations on a beautiful poem. Regards, Craig
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/18/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Craig....
Date: 8/14/2016 11:30:00 AM
A beautiful poem read from you my friend. A seven. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/14/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thank you bl, my lovely friend...
Date: 8/14/2016 3:45:00 AM
I like many below am not familiar with this form. But I must say this is what I call poetry. The repeated lines give the poem more depth. I can't get the line" The crow is cawing far,far" out of my head.Excellent job. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis PS. Thanks for visiting my page. You are welcome anytime.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/14/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/5/2016 9:52:00 PM
I'm not familiar with this form, but I like it, the repetitive line is really good... That crow... where can I find him? I'm looking for some wine, and I have some questions....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/6/2016 12:41:00 AM
My dear Rebecca, it is ghazal... come to me for the wine, for the crow, I'll tell him to find you.
Date: 8/5/2016 8:30:00 AM
I like the cage and stage line...Very nicely penned...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/5/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Joseph....
Date: 8/4/2016 5:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..These are not so easy to write but you make it seem seamless..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/5/2016 2:26:00 AM
Thank you Sara....
Date: 8/3/2016 11:37:00 AM
May evil never come near you. You bring the ghazal to life. Thank you for your visits to my work. I've been....inactive of late. I've been a little down. I'm trying to get back to writing. Hope it works. :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/3/2016 5:05:00 PM
You're so wonderful, I hope you feel better....
Date: 7/30/2016 7:48:00 PM
I love how this one repeats the far far part. It lends a unique tone to your poem, Pashang.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/31/2016 1:15:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.....
Date: 7/30/2016 3:57:00 PM
Rumi would be proud of you my friend. Spoken like a true prophet. Keep writing Pashang, my friend.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/31/2016 1:14:00 AM
Thank you DT.... The darn crow was kept telling me far far. I had to ask him....
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