Lonely Crow

Lonely Crow… 


Where is the place to find it all? The crow is cawing far, far.
Where should I go to hear the call? The crow is cawing far, far.
We’re in prison all our lives, half in bandage and half in strifes.
We need a place without the wall; the crow is cawing far, far.
Listen to him when he speaks; where is the sign that we all seek,
The big or small and short or tall, the crow is cawing far, far.
You go to the garden and ask around, you will hear his name, profound;
he reaches to all big and small; the crow is cawing far, far.
I tried to hide and be unseen, live my life as a teen, fourteen.
Where should I go, not bend or crawl? The crow is cawing far, far.
My body is my cage and stage; boiling I am, filled with rage.
I don't want to be slave and thrall; the crow is cawing far, far.
I asked the crow what was divine. Where can I go to drink his wine?
Learning to read his holy scrawl, the crow is cawing far, far.
Let “Haloo” break his cage and fly, fly into the clouds and die,
escape from this orbiting ball; the crow is cawing far, far.

7/30/16  Haloo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Once we make it to that special place where restrictions count no more, we will find all the answers that we need, Pashang! ~ Regards // paul
Salehi Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 1:12 AM
I hope we do... Thanks, Paul...
Goff Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Yes, quite hypnotic, well done, Pashang...
Salehi Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Thanks James...
Arnone Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:10 AM
The Ghazal is such a musical poetic form. I will have to try this, one day. I like this your Lonely Crow, Pashang. :-)
Salehi Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Thanks Tom....Yes I love Ghazal..
Hicks Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 6:31 PM
I am reminded somewhat of Edgar's Raven, and the looming death on the horizon ... despite our brief glimpses into the truth, there remains that crow, still cawing, cawing. My favorite section of this ghazal was your last four lines, where you allude to life and freedom arising out of death. Eerie poem, but with a lot of truth embedded.
Salehi Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Tim, you're good friend
Jordan Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 10:00 PM
I like it, also a fan of crows. DC
Salehi Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Me too...Thank you..
Beaufort Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Spiritual poem and very good. We are all on a journey and to see what is real is not always easy. Your work is very pleasant to read.
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Thank you Duke....
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Good one..Thanks for stopping by my work Georgia..I have put in a second one on the same poem if you care to read it..Sara
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Thanks Sara, I' ll...
Emu Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 1:13 PM
enjoyed this form of poetry, not an easy task I would think. Congratulations on a beautiful poem. Regards, Craig
Salehi Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Craig....
Devnath  Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:30 AM
A beautiful poem read from you my friend. A seven. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Salehi Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Thank you bl, my lovely friend...
Y. Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 3:45 AM
I like many below am not familiar with this form. But I must say this is what I call poetry. The repeated lines give the poem more depth. I can't get the line" The crow is cawing far,far" out of my head.Excellent job. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis PS. Thanks for visiting my page. You are welcome anytime.
Salehi Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Thank you
Teagan Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 9:52 PM
I'm not familiar with this form, but I like it, the repetitive line is really good... That crow... where can I find him? I'm looking for some wine, and I have some questions....
Salehi Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 12:41 AM
My dear Rebecca, it is ghazal... come to me for the wine, for the crow, I'll tell him to find you.
May Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 8:30 AM
I like the cage and stage line...Very nicely penned...
Salehi Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Thank you Joseph....
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..These are not so easy to write but you make it seem seamless..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Salehi Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 2:26 AM
Thank you Sara....
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 11:37 AM
May evil never come near you. You bring the ghazal to life. Thank you for your visits to my work. I've been....inactive of late. I've been a little down. I'm trying to get back to writing. Hope it works. :)
Salehi Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 5:05 PM
You're so wonderful, I hope you feel better....
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:48 PM
I love how this one repeats the far far part. It lends a unique tone to your poem, Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Thanks Andrea.....
Turner Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Rumi would be proud of you my friend. Spoken like a true prophet. Keep writing Pashang, my friend.
Salehi Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 1:14 AM
Thank you DT.... The darn crow was kept telling me far far. I had to ask him....
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