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Lonely Bagel

Lonely bagel
Loneliness bagel
The bagel of loneliness

Togetherness bagel
The bagel of being together
Bagel of belonging
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 5:49 PM
It would always be a lonely bagel in our house as I don't like them lol:-) hugs jan xx
DiMino Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 5:03 AM
They can be eaten alone, but best with family and friends. I like the together bagel best--but will not turn any bagel down. Love your poem!
Poteet Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Food for thought. My son brings bagels home on the weekends and they sit there on our counter, sometimes. I am challenged to eat just one so it won't be lonely; but when there are many, they are not that much of a temptation. I hate to separate them.
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