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Loneliness Seems Off Beat, Lost Memories Seem To Dance On and On

Loneliness never felt so real, until the ones you once wished to be alone with, up and left you for good... And you're left with only memories, remembering the good with the bad, knowing forever it's all gone... It's just you and the sombered broken silence... That silence only the lonely can hear...  Hearing the sounds of the loneliest lonesome songs are all their left with... The rembrance of melodies together they once shared... Now two worlds torn and spread competely apart... All that remains are those lonesome heartbroken tunes... The tunes that two hearts once beat nsync in rhythm together too ... Rhythmic tones have faded off in a distant sobering sombered silence... Worlds away from eachother two hearts live and life goes on... Only problem is now the same two hearts are completely off beat...On and off, lost and lasting, good and bad memories continue to dance on and on... They keep on dancing to past melodies dancing too off beats... Dancing alone, we kept on dancing in them once familar roads... Nowdays we keep on dancing, but we dance in darkened, lonesome, dead end, one way in and out streets... Zack Brule

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Date: 5/12/2017 12:10:00 PM
Great one!
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Zack Brule
Date: 5/12/2017 12:11:00 PM
thank you
Date: 3/17/2017 2:20:00 AM
Nice, Zack. Yes, the beat does go on, but sometimes apart.
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Zack Brule
Date: 3/17/2017 2:22:00 AM
Right.. thank you sir

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