Loneliness Is Like a Pineappel Peace

loneliness is like a pineapple peace ,  sitting in a bowl on its own .
In the middle there is a hole , it's round just like this bowl it sits in . 
alone and by itself , peace by peace I've taken a pineapple peace from this round bowl it sits in and eating it to myself alone . 

This is how my heart feels like , as it to has a hole in it , deep and round . 
it once was filled as I had the most handsome man in my life , and now I'm alone . his name is still carved in my heart and will never be removed until the day I have him back in my arms for me to hold him with . 

Then I'll never be alone again like the pineapple peace's in a bowl all on it's own that I just ate .


 wrote on the 01/07/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/2/2017 9:14:00 AM
Loneliness is the pill to brokenness. But the pill is hard to take. He'll be back,but just prepare for his return. I share with you!
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Date: 7/31/2017 2:06:00 PM
Welcome Coral to PS, real effective honest piece being penned so well giving the reader much to ponder.
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Date: 7/29/2017 10:22:00 AM
What a great poem. Welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 7/29/2017 4:41:00 PM
thank you very much .
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