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Loneliness 'Automat' Painting By Edward Hopper

sipping cold coffee
staring into emptiness
counting tiny grounds

Copyright © 2009 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Andrea Dietrich

August 11, 2013 at 3:40 PM

hey, this is really good. Looks like you used a painting as inspiration. I'm surprised I have not seen it before.

Daver Austin

May 29, 2012 at 10:13 AM

I also like Hopper. Have done some large copies of his work. Congrats on the selection. daver

James Fraser

December 27, 2009 at 9:17 AM

Wonderful piece to an excellent painting Caryl >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 24, 2009 at 4:56 AM

Congratulations, Caryl, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest with this very imaginative haiku. I love this write. Smiles, Dane Ann

October 23, 2009 at 2:14 PM

This poem packs a punch! Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest to my others comment. Wishing on continued success with your writing. Karen

Brandee Augustus

October 19, 2009 at 12:50 PM

I think you painted the perfect picture with your poem. This poem clearly matches the painting. Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest!